英专大学生就别再用初中英文自我介绍模板了!【福利:面试场景英文自我介绍模板】

教育   2024-12-07 13:07   北京  


最近和好几位同学感兴趣学口译的同学做了口语能力评估,发现了一下共性问题,和大家聊聊我的看法和建议:

1 语音面貌不好。发音是第一张名片,我想大家有过这样的经历,当某一位同学发音清晰,语调得当,表达流畅时,就会觉得他/她英语很棒!这就是我们所说的说英语的一种范或者感觉。但是在听大家的英文自我介绍录音的时候,还是有不少同学读英文时按照汉语拼音的方式去读,没有注意到意群停顿和语调起伏,甚至还有有些同学会出现元音错误或者重音不当等问题。

如果大家要往口译或者演讲方向发展,需要在语音上多花功夫,需要把音标读准,通过模仿找到说英语的感觉和语调,不要用汉语拼音式的方式读英文。建议大家可以看看21世纪英语演讲比赛,找找里面的选手视频,可以选声音和自己相似的选手的视频进行模仿,学习腔调和发音,让自己开口说英语更有感觉。


2 语言质量问题。测试中,有好几位发音很棒,说英文的感觉也到位,但细听语言质量问题较多。英语和中文表达习惯不同,许多同学之前学英语可能是受中文思维影响,所以会导致说英语时,也是脑子里先想中文,然后再“转换”成英文说出来。这么做,一来表达速度慢,二来英文会表达会受中文思维影响。

比如,这次测试就发现了好几个典型的例子。比如,有一位同学想说的是”我很喜欢学英语,但是可能因为没掌握有效方法,所以浪费了很多时间“。但是她说的英文是”I am always enjoying learning English, but I wasted a lot of time in learning it“. ”waste time in doing"的意思是“我觉得时间花再这件事情上是不值得的,觉得浪费了”.这里并不是想说“学英语是浪费自己的时间”,这样的中式英文就会导致对方理解出现偏差,词不达意。

如果想表达”喜欢学英语,但是因为没有掌握有效方法,所以花了很多时间,但效果不明显“,英文可以这么说“I really like learning English, but even though I've put in a lot of time, I haven't seen much improvement. I guess the problem is that I haven't quite figured out the best way to learn.“”或者”I'm passionate about learning English, but I feel like I've spent a lot of time on ineffective learning methods.”

除了表达不地道,还有一部分就是语法和词汇,比如时态,主谓一致,句子成分缺失等。还有同学全程都是用简单句,或者还是再用高中的自我介绍模板“My name is……. I am ** years old. I am from……. . I like ……. I want to ……. That is all."  

这里,和大家分享针对面试求职场景下自我介绍的英文表达模板,希望对大家有帮助:

    "Good morning/afternoon, I'm [Your Name], and I am a highly motivated professional with a solid educational foundation and a genuine passion for [Relevant Industry/Field]. I hold a degree in [Your Degree] from the esteemed [Your University], where I not only gained valuable theoretical knowledge but also developed a strong sense of curiosity and a hunger for continuous learning.


    During my internship at [Previous Company], I was fortunate to apply my academic knowledge in a practical setting, allowing me to refine my skills in [Key Skills]. I actively contributed to projects such as [Specific Project/Initiative], where I played a pivotal role in [Noteworthy Accomplishment]. These experiences not only strengthened my skill set but also instilled in me a deep appreciation for the challenges and opportunities within our industry.


    My passion for [Relevant Industry/Field] goes beyond my professional endeavors. I am an avid follower of industry trends and innovations, and I make it a point to stay updated with the latest developments. This commitment to staying informed empowers me to approach challenges with a fresh perspective and to seize opportunities as they arise."


    用模板的范例:


    "Godd morning, I'm Sarah Johnson, and I come to you as a highly motivated professional with a solid educational foundation and a genuine passion for marketing and digital communications. I hold a degree in Marketing and Communications from the esteemed University of XXX, where I not only gained valuable theoretical knowledge but also developed a strong sense of curiosity and a hunger for continuous learning.


    During my internship at Digital Marketing Solutions, I was fortunate to apply my academic knowledge in a practical setting, allowing me to refine my skills in digital marketing, social media management, and data analytics. I actively contributed to projects such as the 'DigitalRevamp' campaign, where I played a pivotal role in increasing online engagement by 40%. These experiences not only strengthened my skill set but also instilled in me a deep appreciation for the challenges and opportunities within the dynamic field of digital marketing.


    My passion for marketing and digital communications goes beyond my professional endeavors. I am an avid follower of industry trends and innovations, and I make it a point to stay updated with the latest developments. This commitment to staying informed empowers me to approach challenges with a fresh perspective and to seize opportunities as they arise."


关于最近的英语口语评估的分享就先说这么多,希望对大家有帮助啦。 感兴趣找我点评的同学,欢迎加我微信,申请预约哦。

想找Jacky点评口译笔记和录音的同学,阔acky微信,来预约时间哦。



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