在刚上班的时候,看了一本米歇尔·奥巴马的书《becoming》,形容一种永远在变动的,“成为”自己的状态。印象深刻。
在今天写续写结尾的时候,我正在纠结Sadie的成长之路,然后突然想起了这本书,也就相应做了修改。
下面我把自己的尝试分享给大家,如你尚未读过题目day 169 读后续写- 人间烦忧随风去,归隐蓝海心自凉。可以先自己揣摩。
enjoy your read!
下面是我的续写尝试
Para 1: "Want to know how I get through my parents' divorce?" Grandma asked.
Like being shocked by electricity, that word sent chills through my body and pain to my heart. Looking up at her wrinkled face, I felt something similar in her smile. "It’s okay to feel overwhelmed when everything seems to be falling apart dear,” Grandma held my hand and pointed at the shades of blue, “but there’s something about the ocean—the way it ebbs and flows, always returning—that taught me to breathe, to let go, and to embrace the beauty even amidst the storms." Then, she turned and put the shell in my hand, “Like this shell.”
Para 2: "The beautiful shells here gave me the courage to live on,” Grandma said.
Tracing her fingers along its spiraled edge, she continued, "Just like us, they endure hardships—waves crashing against them, storms threatening to break them apart—but they emerge stronger and more beautiful." Hearing that, I caressed the intricate patterns etched upon its surface, moved by its silent story of resilience and strength. Later, whenever feeling overwhelmed, I would go and look for these precious little reminders of hope. Day by day, in the soothing company of the Big Blue, I felt myself “becoming”—like the ocean and like a shell.
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