我认为这篇续写day 165 读后续写- 捕捉瞬间 or 活在当下 (24年内蒙古赤峰联考),在主题上与day 158 读后续写- 皮囊易朽,唯精神长存(24年浙江z20联考续写)相对称,所以我也起了对称的标题。
前者,站在人生的终点,反观意义所在。后者,藏在镜头的后面,回望岁月所存。
用这篇文章,反思自身,是否过度沉溺于虚拟的体验,而忘了真正地活着。
enjoy your read!
下面是我的续写尝试
Para 1: I called Raul that night.
"Hey, it’s me," I said, my voice tentative. "I've been thinking and I can't help but wonder if I'm missing something more meaningful in life." There was a pause on the line. "You know," he finally replied, his tone thoughtful, "Sometimes, it just felt like you were more focused on capturing the moment than actually living it." His honesty struck a chord. Staring out at the flickering lights, I admitted, "I don’t want that to define our moments together." As I imagined him nodding slowly, he uttered, “I get that,” his voice steady, “What do you suggest?”
Para 2: “How about doing something meaningful for at least the next year?” I answered.
My pulse quickened as I envisioned us embarking on adventures that transcended the digital realm. “Let’s put our phones away when we’re together and focus on real experiences—explore the world, volunteer, or even try out new hobbies.” I could sense a spark in him as he leaned into my idea. “I’d like that,” he replied, a smile blossoming through the speaker. At that moment, a new resolve ignited within me, shimmering with infinite possibilities. I knew, instead of chasing ephemeral likes that eroded, we would be creating memories that endured.
最后和大家分享一首歌,来自Kansas, Dust in the Wind.
因前者需vip才能听,此处和大家分享Sarah Brightman的版本,equally beautiful。
enjoy.
I close my eyes
Only for a moment, and the moment's gone
All my dreams
Pass before my eyes, a curiosity
Dust in the wind
All they are is dust in the wind
Same old song
Just a drop of water in an endless sea
All we do
Crumbles to the ground, though we refuse to see (ah, ah, ah)
Dust in the wind
All we are is dust in the wind
Oh, oh, oh
Now, don't hang on
Nothin' last forever, but the earth and sky
It slips away
And all your money won't another minute buy
Dust in the wind
All we are is dust in the wind (all we are is dust in the wind)
Dust in the wind (everything is dust in the wind)
Everything is dust in the wind
In the wind
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