day 167 读后续写- 攀援而上,滚滚而下(24年四川开学联考)

文摘   2024-09-21 12:00   山西  

今天读到的这篇续写题目,来自24年四川省开学联考。

主题是我写过很多篇的“绝地求生”,我也很感兴趣,所以决定明天就动手写一些。

今天的更新,先和大家分享一下我之前写过的同主题续写,从森林,到夹缝,从山上,到水中,从火海,到冰湖,不一而足。

Day 12 读后续写-火海救婴

Day 13 续写精析-文似看山不喜平

Day 45 读后续写-身在险境,绝处“缝”生

Day 46 续写精析- 生的喜悦 气势磅礴

Day 51 读后续写- 童年追忆,坠冰无弃

Day 52 读后续写--刺骨的水流,温暖的手

Day 70 读后续写- 林中探险,火海迷途

Day 71 读后续写- 希望是一条银色的丝带

day 86 读后续写- 湿漉漉,心慌慌

day 87 读后续写- 蓝色的碎片,心底的波澜

陷入绝境,最考验作者的,就是写出精彩的人物心理,以及人与环境的互动性。

下面是今天的续写题目,欢迎大家先自行揣摩。

enjoy your read!


下面是续写题目



My brother and I set off shortly after sunrise. The air was cool, but I knew that wouldn't last long. I'd chosen this hike for a hot day like today so that we'd climb down into a redrock canyon (峡谷), where we would swim in a pool and camp by a picturesque waterfall. I knew it wouldn't be an easy hike, though. I'd researched and planned for weeks, knowing climbing down into the canyon is challenging.

About a mile in, the trail started to dip down to the river and the footing became steep (陡峭的]). After repeated slips on the loose ground, my brother decided to turn back to the car. Unwilling to give up on my plan so soon and remembering there was another car where we parked, I believed there was someone else going to the canyon. So I chose to continue alone. He gave me the bag which contained food and water. Then we decided to meet up at the car the next day.

After another mile or so, the river came into view below me, but the trail became less obvious. I chose to go down along a bush-covered slope (斜坡) . As soon as I began hiking down, though, I realized the ground was much looser than I'd thought. I decided to climb back up and find another way.

I tried to pull myself up, but, unfortunately, the rock I was standing on broke beneath me. My face struck earth first. I was rolling with my bag, dirt and red sandstone flying beneath me as I picked up speed. I was going to die, I thought.

Then I fell flat on my back, my head hitting on a baseball-size stone. To my surprise, I was alive, but everything hurt. After lying in confusion for a few moments, I tried to look around. One of my eyes was already swollen shut, and through the other, the world spun around me. I could hardly move my left hand, and my right ankle hurt terribly.

Para 1: Fighting my unsteady vision, I pulled out my phone, only to find there was no service.

Para 2: It had been about 2 hours since my fall when I heard the sound of several people.

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