day 155 读后续写- “蚊”歌起舞 (高三8月底九师联盟)

文摘   2024-09-02 12:00   山西  

这张图片让我感到一种恐怖的可爱


今天和大家分享一道8月底刚结束的高三年级九师联盟联考真题。

这篇续写设置在旅途返程的夜晚,一家人行车在公路上,和“蚊子”间一段奇妙的同行。

有的小朋友在写作时没有捕捉到线索提示的写作倾向,所以我决定动笔写一篇。其实也是在精批孩子们的习作时,自己突然很想写。

下面我先和大家分享一下续写的题目,明天的更新会把我的续写尝试分享给大家。大家先来揣摩一下剧情吧。

enjoy your read!


下面是续写题目



"Only a couple hours to go," I told myself. We'd made it to northern Indiana after driving all afternoon and evening, heading home from a family vacation in Wisconsin. We'd gotten a late start packing up, none of us wanting to leave our lakeside hotel before we had to. Now we were paying the price. It would be past midnight when we got home.

My wife Jeannie, who was always thoughtful and positive, drove for some time to allow me to take a break from driving. Now I took the turn. However, I wasn't so alert(警觉的),

I turned on the radio, softly, so as not to disturb my wife, who was sleeping beside me. I was on a two-lane state highway. It was slower than the interstate, but less stressful. I generally didn't mind driving late at night, though I really could have used a cup of coffee. I had a look at my three sleeping children, ages 14, 10, and 3, in the back seat.

“Keep alert!” I said to myself.

The voice of my 3-year-old son, Jon, broke the silence. "I have to go to the bathroom, Dad." I couldn't stop in the middle of the highway in the dark. But right up ahead was a building. A diner. Maybe a chance to get that coffee. I pulled into the parking lot. The restaurant was closed.

I looked around and saw the tall grass surrounding the lot. That would have to do for Jon. I led Jon there. As he took care of business, I tried to drive away a mosquito that flew out of the grass. Then another. And another. I urged Jon to hurry. We ran back to the car and closed the doors. Jeannie, our oldest daughter Amy, and Jennifer who still wore her hat were wide awake.

I felt a mosquito touch down on my neck. I said, "I sure picked the wrong place to stop." Jeannie patted me on the arm and attempted to catch the mosquito.

I switched on the light in the car. The children were screaming, "They're everywhere!"

"You do the driving," Jeannie quickly said to me with a smile. "Let us take care of the mosquitoes." The children readily agreed. 

Para 1: I started the car and my family started to fight against the mosquitoes. 

Para 2: As their voices of victory continued, I became totally awake. 

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