今天这篇续写还是挺有意思的。
为了写出更准确的文章,我先是阅读了一些受伤后跑者为洛杉矶马拉松做准备时写的博文(https://laist.com/news/how-to-la/ive-never-run-26-2-miles-before-but-this-sunday-i-will),记下了一些准备的细节,然后找打了一张23年LA Marathon的路线图,从中选了一些地名准备用在文章中,然后才开始动笔。
写完以后觉得冗长,又删删减减,最终呈现出现在的样子。
下面我就把我的尝试分享给大家,如大家尚未读过题目day 186 读后续写- 逆袭马拉松 (24.11 山西),可以先揣摩。
enjoy your read!
下面是我的尝试
Para 1: The first day back out on the street was a challenge.
Lacing up the shoes, excitement clashed with trepidation, sending butterflies fluttering in the stomach. Doubts surfaced, but memories of training dedication quickly restored focus. A carefully crafted plan emerged: gradually reestablishing the running routine, incorporating cross-training, and refining dietary habits for optimal energy. Hydration stations became a constant presence while joining a local running club offered camaraderie and accountability. With each passing day, strength returned, and the passion for running regained its powerful grip, reinvigorating the spirit and pushing past the initial hesitations.
Para 2: When the race day arrived, I was fit and motivated to run the race of a lifetime.
Standing at the starting line which buzzed with the vibrancy of hopeful runners, anticipation soared when the gun fired, unleashing a surge of exhilaration. Memories of training along Sunset Boulevard danced through my mind. As the sun climbed higher, casting warm rays, the stunning California landscape came alive, invigorating my exhausted limbs. By midday, after more than six hours of running, my legs begged for relief, yet I was determined to push it through for I knew, in times of adversity, for every step that brought pain, it also brought me closer to victory.
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