这篇续写day 188 读后续写- 疲惫的肩膀，淋湿的书包 （24.11 赤峰）写的好艰难。
写了八十多篇续写，我从没看过一篇参考答案，但写这篇的时候，我真的动了心想看看别人是怎么在钢丝上行走，平衡内容的丰富和篇幅的局限。
当然，为了原创性，我还是忍住了。
这篇续写主题的敏感性，以及人物的众多，使得让每个人都有戏份，都能成长，还要把词数控制在100左右几乎成为了mission impossible
我挣扎着走在悬崖边缘，试图写出一些让我印象深刻的画面，但说不得最后还是一篇平庸之作。自我感觉，就好像织了一件不甚满意的毛衣，反复拆补，反而变得不伦不类。这也是为什么今天没有中午更新的原因。
正好今天有晚自习，我抽时间又读了几遍，改了改。
下面我就把我的尝试分享给大家。如读者们有好的想法和表达，也欢迎大家分享，我也想进步。续写题目在此day 188 读后续写- 疲惫的肩膀，淋湿的书包 （24.11 赤峰）
enjoy your read!
下面是我的续写尝试
Paragraph 1: As Colin walked into the school, he decided that he must do something to change the situation.
Entering the building, he caught his own reflection on the glass door—weak, defeated and strange. “This shouldn’t be me,” he whispered. Traversing through the bustling hallways with his fists clenched, Colin approached Mrs. Harris, his caring teacher, and recounted the torment he had been enduring. At the end of his trembling speech, Mrs. Harris’s eyes were already blazing with fierce protectiveness. Reassured that he wasn't alone on this battle, Colin felt a flicker of hope ignite within him. As he made his way back to class, for the first time in weeks, the burden on his shoulders began to lighten.
Paragraph 2: From then on, Colin felt a change in his life.
Together with his parents and teachers, they crafted a plan for him to reconnect with friends and form a protective circle that would shatter loneliness and shield each other. One day at lunch, a former bully came to their table and apologized to Colin, admitting his own mistakes and insecurities. Quiet for a moment, Colin then looked up and smiled, “Apology accepted,” his calmness surprising even himself. Once Colin was driven to the precipice of despair, but now, empowered by loved ones, suddenly, he found not only the courage to reclaim his own voice but the strength to pull others away from the edge.
ps：在我写完最后一句话后，又想起一个描写，“曾经我曾在绝望的风暴中淋湿，但在家人，朋友和老师的支持下，突然科林不止发现了找到自己声音的力量，还为他人撑起了伞。”
觉得这个句子能和原文一开始书被淋湿呼应，也能和后面原谅他人对照。两个结尾结构基本一致。感觉第一句更有力量感，第二句更有美感。大家怎么想呢？
下面我把这段话的英语也写出来，大家可以参考，“Once, Colin found himself drenched in a storm of despair, but with the support of family, friends, and teachers, he suddenly discovered not only the strength to find his own voice but also the power to hold an umbrella for someone in the rain.”
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