这篇文章day 179 读后续写- 潜入埃拉特的深蓝，在故事中主角81岁时，其女儿仍然鼓励他/她去尝试潜水。这一点在主角明确且多次表示抗拒的情况下，让我初读时感到很不理解，甚至很奇特。
然后在思考这篇文章怎么写时，我才意识到我自己已经被刻板印象绑架，下意识认为81岁就应该做一些不那么冒险的事情，而忘记了不被恐惧裹挟的人生或许才能看到更多精彩。
是啊，是什么让我觉得八十一岁就只能写下最后一页，而不能开启新的冒险呢？
带着这一份谦卑的醒悟，我意识到我已经想好了这篇故事的结尾，也是这篇续写更新的标题 合起旧的章节，开启新的世界。
下面我就把我的续写尝试分享给大家，如你尚未读过题目day 179 读后续写- 潜入埃拉特的深蓝，可以先自行揣摩。
enjoy your read!
ps：今天感觉好多了。
下面是我的续写尝试
Para 1: "You'll get used to it," Crystal encouraged me.
Hesitant on the last stair, I stood between the desert's warmth and the ocean's chill. But when I met my daughter’s beaming gaze, I took a deep breath and plunged in. The noodle cradled me as I kicked and embraced the water. With each stroke, my confidence grew until Crystal urged me to dive beneath the surface. Instantly, blue enveloped my vision, stealing my breath. In that moment, panic threatened, but my daughter swimming beside me washed away my fear.
Para 2: After a moment, I started moving along the rope.
Unburdened at last, I marveled at the vast seabed, its vibrant life shimmering through gentle waves. With each dive, my fear dissolved, replaced by liberation. Guided by Crystal, I ventured further and deeper, awestruck by coral reefs and schools of fish—dreams long buried by fear. I recalled the notion that turning 80 marks the final chapter. I once agreed, but now, swimming freely with my daughter in the ocean, I felt not just the close of an old chapter, but the opening of a new page.
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