有多久没有因为写续写而落泪了？
之前让我泪流的几篇文章，要么涉及友情，要么涉及亲情
Day 62 读后续写- 银河系的战争，泪水浸透的纸 （广东省二模）
这一篇则是和自我命运的交手，对自身意志的砥砺，才让主角的人性绽放出了夺目的光芒。
这篇续写题目day 175 读后续写- “截断”梦想，“接续”希望 （2024年10月 江浙皖高三联考）其实有一个很大的悬念，那就是医生在建议主角截肢，“my doctor recommended an amputation (截肢) if I wanted to be able to walk properly again.”，但主角决定推迟决定后 “I found the experience too depressing for words and was determined to put off the decision for as long as possible.”，他到底截肢了没有？
在这篇文章中，我给出了自己的答案。
在写第二段的时候，我着重思考了开头和结尾。
经历过一番纠结，最终决定在 呼应性 原则的指导下，设计一个虚实结合的切入点，由实入虚，再由虚入实，带着读者们回顾主角动人的经历。而结尾处，主角会穿过终点线吗？我觉得这并不重要。回首往事的艰辛、痛苦和折磨，在站上赛场的那一刻，他/她已是赢家。
下面是我的续写尝试
enjoy your read!
下面是我的续写尝试
Para 1: I bought an exercise bike and used it for 30 minutes three times a week.
At first, just getting on the bike felt like a monumental challenge—the pain in my leg was a constant companion, whispering doubts as I fought through each rotation. But with every turn of the pedals, those doubts lessened, and I felt the tendrils of strength slowly creeping back. Day after day, the rhythmic whir of the pedals became my lifeline. Carefully exchanging frustration for focus, I visualized a grassy path, daring to dream of a time when I wouldn’t just walk, but run again. Gradually, as I pedaled away the memories of pain, my confidence began to bloom.
Para 2: Almost four years after my accident, I entered a local half marathon.
Standing the starting line, I closed my eyes and took a deep breath, letting the dark days of hanging alone on the cliff, the doctor's grim proposal mixed with dreams of tossing my crutches into the river and countless, painful, exhausting hours spent on the exercise bike flash through my mind. As the sound of the starting gun brought me back, I wiped off the tears and opened my eyes. Ten, taking my first step onto the racecourse and feeling the wind blowing softly against my legs, I realized that sometimes, our scars tell the most profound stories of broken dreams and repaired hope, stitched together by one pedal stroke, one step, at a time.
下面用一首关于这篇续写的小诗结尾
Scars of Resilience
On the mountaintop, fate took its toll,
A rock from above shattered my soul.
In shadows of pain, I hung by a thread,
With dreams of my past swirling in dread.
Nights whispered solace, as crutches I tossed,
In rivers of hope, my fears were embossed.
Nine surgeries later, they spoke of amputation,
But I chose resilience, igniting my passion.
An exercise bike, my lifeline anew,
With each gentle turn, my spirit broke through.
Four years on, I stood strong at the line,
A marathon awaited, my heart's grand design.
Each step a testament, each mile a dream,
From darkness emerged a resilient beam.
Crossing that finish, I wept with release,
For scars tell our stories—each battle, our peace.
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