day 188 读后续写- 疲惫的肩膀,淋湿的书包 (24.11 赤峰)

文摘   2024-11-04 12:04   山西  

今天和大家分享的这篇续写来自内蒙古赤峰10月高三联考,故事主题是人与社会-校园霸凌。

这是一个我不曾写过的主题,因此看到后就想动笔写一写,同时也对这个话题更深入的思考。

下面我把题目分享给大家。

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下面是续写题目



"Hurry up, Colin!" Mum shouted from the hallway. "If we don't get going now, you will be late for school."

Colin was sitting on the edge of his bed, looking down at his feet. Taking a deep breath, Colin slowly stood up and collected his schoolbooks. After putting them in his bag, he took a long look around his bedroom and went to join his mum.

"Are you all right, Colin?" Mum asked with obvious concern. "Your father and I have noticed you've become very quiet recently and that you don't laugh as much as you used to. Is everything OK at school?"

Colin looked into his mum's troubled face as she put a comforting arm around his shoulders." Don't worry, Mum. Everything's good," he replied with a weak smile. Mum drove Colin to school, who sat in the back seat in silence all the way. Colin watched the world pass by, deep in thought.

He used to love going to school and he was always the one who would tell his mum to hurry up. As he stared out of the car window, he remembered that there was a time when he couldn't wait to get to school and meet up with his friends.

But things were different now. Colin didn't understand why things had changed or what he had done wrong. All he knew was that a group of older boys had started to make fun of him. They would call him names and push him when nobody was looking. They would hide his books so that he would get into trouble with his teachers. One day, they even put his bag outside when it was raining so that all his books got wet. When the car eventually arrived at the school, Colin quickly brushed away silent tears and slowly got out of the car.

Paragraph 1: As Colin walked into the school, he decided that he must do something to change the situation.

Paragraph 2: From then on, Colin felt a change in his life.


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