今天这篇续写从早自习开始写，陆陆续续在工作间隙补充，到11:56分写成下面的样子。
每段话词数虽已删减，但还是超标了一些，我希望能在明天的更新中为大家呈现一篇更改后，更符合高考词数要求；经过雕琢，更符合我自己认为满分续写标准的版本。今天先把最原汁原味的版本分享给大家。
如你尚未读过题目day 146 读后续写- “子夏问孝，子曰：‘色难。”，可以先读，自行揣摩。如有建议，欢迎留言。
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下面是我的续写尝试
Para1: As the cashier put the DVD into a plastic bag, I walked over to the younger woman.
Undoubtedly, it wasn’t my place to judge. Yet, something within—the holiday spirit, the warmth of the older woman’s company or maybe cherished memories of my late mother—propelled me forward. Standing before her, I greeted, “Happy holidays!” Her eyes lifted from her watch to meet mine. “Are you the daughter of that lady?” I gestured. The younger woman checked my uniform before nodding. “Yes. Anything wrong?” I smiled, “No, not at all. She just reminded me of my mom, and I had the most wonderful time helping her find a movie for you.” The surprise on her face deepened. “I wish you a happy New Year filled with joyful memories with your family.” Then, noticing the mother approaching, I turned to leave, catching the soft murmur of gratitude: “Thank you.”
Para2: The elderly woman moved with her deliberate slowness back to her daughter.
I retreated to the aisles by the front of the store, where I could only see the daughter’s face. As she caught sight of the plastic bag, her expression softened, the irritation ebbing away to reveal a glow of gratitude. I breathed a sigh of relief and returned to my duties. The bustling holiday atmosphere quickly swept me up, nearly allowing the earlier encounter to slip from my mind. Just then, I felt a gentle tap on my arm. Turning around, I found the elderly woman, her dignity enhanced by her years, and her daughter by the door. “We’re going home now. Thank you for your present,” she said, her voice brimming with joy. Once again touched by her sweet, familiar manner, I smiled, “Thank you, ma’am, for your presence.”
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