上午好好补了一觉，下午自习才
这篇续写day 194 读后续写- 爱如春水，心手相牵（24.11 宁波）第二段我最初构思的是，在集会结束，统计出筹款超出预期后，大家掌声和欢呼声里，Emily被簇拥着讲话。她环视一周，看着和自己奋战的队友和另一支团队的领导，深吸一口气开始讲话。
但是我写第二段的时候，刚写完筹款超出预期，词数就所剩不多了，只能是对结尾进行了删减，重新调整了场景设计。调整后，两段正好各100词。
下面就是我的续写尝试。
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下面是我的续写尝试
Para 1: The committee agreed to let Emily lead this effort.
With renewed hope, she organized a meeting with the other group's leader, Jake, who initially appeared skeptical about merging their events, raising concerns about losing visibility and support for his cause. Emily, however, came prepared. Armed with data about both teams, she meticulously outlined how a joint event could amplify their outreach and create a larger impact on the community. Her sincerity shone through as she passionately explained how the combined efforts would not only bolster donations but also foster a spirit of unity in Springdale. Gradually, as he recognized the potential benefits of collaboration, Jake's doubt transformed into intrigue.
Para 2: After days of negotiation, Emily finally got a positive reply.
As the days flew by, the two teams coordinated tirelessly, creating a vibrant event filled with food, music, games and community booths. On the big day, people flocked to the combined setup, enjoying the various activities while their donations multiplied. After cleaning up, they counted the contributions, shocked to find they had raised twice their original goal. The crowd erupted in cheers. Then, looking at Laura and Jack’s smiley faces among the jubilant group, what Helen Keller said suddenly surfaced in Emily's mind: “Alone we can do so little; together we can do so much.”
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