day 193 读后续写- 他停下了手表,却获得了时间

文摘   2024-11-16 12:19   山西  

好久不见。‍‍

坦白说,这篇续写不好写。‍‍‍‍‍‍‍

两个悬念:1. 主角和儿子之间发生了什么? 2. 故事中妇人的儿子发生了什么?‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍

除了要构思一个合理的答案,还需要想方设法把续写语言和钟表匠的身份结合,串联起手表,时间和感情。‍‍‍‍

我在上自习的时候写下了这篇续写的雏形,现在就将最终结果分享给大家。‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍

如你尚未读过题目,可以先读day 192 读后续写- 逝者如斯夫,自行揣摩。‍‍‍‍

enjoy your read!


下面是我的续写尝试



Para 1: One month later, the elderly woman returned to collect her watch.

As she entered the shop, her eyes shimmered with an emotion that spoke volumes. Looking at Henry’s ingenious creation, she shared her son’s story, revealing how he was a dedicated worker in the bustling city, consumed by the demands of life, but the crushing sadness of not being able to be with his father during his final moments haunted him. He was stuck in a state of limbo, wrestling with regret and sorrow, unable to forgive himself for missing that irreplaceable opportunity to say goodbye. As she finished the story and took the watch into her trembling hands, Henry was lost in contemplation.

Para 2: As the woman left, Henry felt a profound sense of change.

Driven by an urge to mend the broken bonds of his own life, he closed the shop and set out for his son’s city. When they met, Henry pulled the crown of his watch, attempting to freeze time. In that suspended, stretched moment, they engaged in a conversation that transcended the years lost — shared laughter and tears intertwined as they reflected on memories and the passing of time. as a clock smith, Henry had always taken pride in crafting timepieces that measured time accurately; but now, he understood that sometimes one must allow time to rush by, or on the contrary, pause it to seize life.


下面是我看完题目写的一段汉语续写提示,也分享给大家

因为错过,做了一件不好的事情,或者一件重要的事他没有做,结果走不出来。

因为工作耽搁了去医院看父亲最后一面。

他关闭了店门,他走向他的儿子,拔下手表的那个暂停按钮,然后和孩子对话。

拔下按键,或许是在第二段开头。解放自己,好像从一个永不停歇的焦虑情绪中挣脱。滴滴答答声曾占满心房,挤走了对自己最关键的人。

作为一个工匠,他一直以准确测量时间而骄傲,但现在的他意识到,如果想利用好时间,他必须学会忘记时间,尽情享受。他停下了手表,却获得了时间。

手表的规律走动,有时候会给我们错觉,让我们以为我们拥有时间,还有更多的时间,但事实却并非如此。偶尔停下手表,才真正让人解放。

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