学英语,还得学语义语用逻辑修辞写作!今碰巧点开某语法专家文
一、请看笔者讲解吧!
CNN: Trump frequently attacks and mocks political enemies on Twitter, and previously went after Thunberg in September, though his Thursday morning broadside was still jarring coming from a sitting US president against a teenager.
1.【智华英语】译文:特朗普经常在推特上攻击和嘲笑政治上的敌人,
2.译注:《十六岁的花季》诗 席慕容;电视编导 张弘富敏。
CNN英文写作欣赏:
3.句式结构:Clause-A, and clause-B,
4.句子逻辑剥洋葱:第一层A and B...,第二层B=省略主语Trump previously went..., though C...。第三层:his...broadside was still jarring + his...broadside was coming from...;第四层:B..., though his...jarring(, which was rich) coming from ...分析见下。
押韵-er:三个clauses都以-er结尾:Twitter
押韵-ing: 四个词morning jarring
押韵-ly:都用三音节-ly副词:frequently经常、
辅音谐韵:Thunberg和Thur
6.并列动词:attack and mock近义词双词叠用以表达语义递进和强调。
7.同近义词:attack and mock攻击嘲讽;go after追着批/攻击;broadside (v.&n.)
8.形式反词:go after与come from短语构成词对应字面意思相反,但意思不反。写作手法对比感强,文采飞扬!
9.短语动词:go after sb.
字面义:在...后面追(想追上某人以把某物递交或说话)
比喻义:[跟动物一样在后面追着]攻击。
引申义:警方/检方:跟踪调查起诉。 追究或处罚某人
追求异性:pursue/court sb,如:He's been pursuing/courting the school beauty for months, hoping to build a relationship. 他追了校花几个月,想建立恋爱关系。
执着猛追:He's been going after the campus belle for months, trying to win her heart.他猛追校花好几个月,竭力想俘获她的芳心。
常用口语: If you see someone you really want, you have to go after them.如果遇上真心想要的人,你就去把她追到来吧[/把他.
朗文go after somebody采取多种行动以惩罚做错事或违法的人
Rules are needed to go after brokers who sell unsuitable investments.需要制定规则来追究销售不合适投资的经纪人。
The law that goes after those who hire illegally is controversial among businesses. 追究非法雇佣者的法律在企业界有争议。
10.精妙though: and yet; but still; however; nevertheless.(况且;可依然是;然而;尽管如此)用
11.用词精妙:broadside:战舰火炮一侧(火力全开);肆意谩骂;
12.用词精妙:jar: v. 发出令人不适的刺耳声音,如电锯切割金属锐器刮擦玻璃等。jarring: adj.令人炸耳的;令人不爽的;(抨击评论等)刺耳的; 令人震惊的;引发轩然大波的(having a harshly concussive, disagreeable, or discordant effect产生剧烈的震荡、不愉快或不和谐的影响)。jarringly adv.令人不爽地;掀起波澜地。
13.习惯用句:That’s rich coming from him/her/you etc 用于表示某人不该批评另一个人做某事(因其没资格指责他人或有失身份)。【rich】:荒唐的;可笑的。
可能汉译:亏他/她/你说得出那种话!他/她/你还真好意思说得出口!他/她/你也不撒泡尿照照自己?
类似英语:How could he/she/you say such a thing? He/She/You have the nerve to say that! Why don't you take a good look at yourself?
例句:You think I’m too selfish? That’s rich coming from you! 你还认为我太自私了?这话从你嘴里说出来,可真是太讽刺了!
例句:He accused me of being dishonest, which was a bit rich coming from him.他指责我不诚实,这话从他嘴里说出来真是太讽刺了。
例句:That was rich coming from him! 亏他说得出那种话!...
用法变化:经常可以只说开头的两个词That's rich!;要表示更详细信息时说出后面的部分,尤其是后面的人不是代词时(如以上的CNN原文),可省略前面的That's rich而只说后面的coming from...。
原句coming from sb这个短语跟九月追骂以及周四谩骂都是相关的,所以要改写句子的话,可以改如#4,或改如:..., though his Thursday morning broadside was still jarringly rich coming from a sitting US president against a teenager.
14.完美结合!CNN炮轰川普时用go after someone,在字面上看像是在追求某人,
二、看川普9月英文反讽:口语好学!
Donald J. Trump@realDonaldTrump Sep 23, 2019: She seems like a very happy young girl looking forward to a bright and wonderful future. So nice to see! 15.写作特点:押韵,She seems开头to see结尾。
16.川普推文巧妙运用了反讽(Irony)修辞手法,故意把愤怒
三、再看川普周四broadside火力全开!怎么回事?如此简单的常用英语怎么会是broads
17.译文:真是傻帽!Greta必须搞定愤怒管理这个难题,
18.例句源自词典:She looks so ridiculous in that hat.她戴那帽子就像个傻帽!Greta Thunberg生于2003年,到2019年她才16岁呀!
19.点赞数15.8万!其实,这是说东道西innuendo,是含沙射影insinuation。
20.【多梗】good old boy叫干啥就干啥的老实男;old-fashioned movie老派电影,这里指以前的drive-in (theater)汽车电影场,
21.【口语】Chill out!或Chill(彻底放松一下)!用在原文这个语境,是暗讽Greta可能是因没性生活而内分泌失调导致怒火中烧。
22.【修辞】写作时,用心里想说的词附近挨着的词,让读者自行脑部,
23.【试定名】Associative Lexicon词语关联:这种figure of speech(修辞手法)利用词汇的邻近性或联想性,
四、来而不往非礼也!Greta Thunberg被特离谱攻击后立即把推特Bio简介改为:A teenager working on her anger management problem. Currently chilling and watching a good old fashioned movie with a friend.
24.译文:一枚致力于解决怒气控制问题的少女,正跟男票一起一边泄火一边看一部老片子。
25.潜台词Subtext:
五、君子报仇,十年不晚!一年不到,机会就到!
特朗普因点票落后而暴跳如雷发推:STOP THE COUNT!(停止点票!) Greta立即用Trump骂她的原话,
So ridiculous. Donald must work on his Anger Management problem, then go to a good old fashioned movie with a friend! Chill Donald, Chill!
26.译文:如此荒唐!唐纳德必须解决他的愤怒管理难题,
27.全球波澜:Greta这推,140多万个点赞!是特朗普的近9倍!
六、话术较量,谁是赢家?不重要了,重要的是咱学到了!咱不骂人也得要懂弦外之音话里有话。否则,被人骂了还傻不愣登笑呵呵呢!