day 203 读后续写- 在凛冽的雪原开出鲜艳的花

文摘   2024-12-05 12:00   山西  

最近看了一部纪录片《青海·我们的国家公园》第一季,共三集,分别命名为 草海,冰河,峡谷。

其中有一个片段,讲述了在生长在高原的植物,进化出花朵朝下绽放的机制以此抵御初春的寒风。

另一部最近看的纪录片 《亚洲》,同样有一集讲述在西伯利亚的寒风中,动物和鸟类如何在万物凋敝的情况下,获取能量,挣扎求生。

看到今天我想分享的续写故事时,一下子我就想起了这两个片段。

一者,是自然界生物在看似不可能的环境中生存,一者是这篇续写的主角Jack经常只在生活中看到消极的一面。

Jack的心理机制不只是给自己制造了压力,还让与之朝夕相处的家人有时倍感光火,有种“所作的努力不被珍惜”的伤感。

但具体该如何帮助Jack,让他也如雪域花朵,即便是在高寒又贫瘠的环境中,也能发掘土壤的营养,吸收阳光中的热量呢?

这就看我们的奇思妙想了。

下面我就把题目分享给大家。

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下面是续写题目


My middle child, Jake, was smart and good-looking, but he always sees the cup of life as half empty. Every day when he came home from school, Jake would list everything bad that happened that day!

On his ninth birthday, we saved enough money to take the family to Disneyland for two days. His dad and l didn't make much then, so it cost a considerable amount, but we felt Jake's birthday was worth it. After doing Disneyland to death (玩够了), we returned to our hotel room, all exhausted. And l asked the birthday boy, “Did you have fun today, Jake?’

All my fault-finding son could say to me was “Pirates of the Caribbean was closed!" “Jake Marshall," I was clearly unable to contain my anger, “we stood in line for an hour and a half to see The Haunted Mansion. We rode Space Mountain three times. We spent two days playing in the park, and all you can say is, Pirates of the Caribbean was closed?" Clearly, something had to be done about his negative attitude and I was going to be the one to do it!

I was determined to help him. I read every article and bought every book. With the help of great resources, l found my son had the tendency to see the worst in every situation. My research told me that people with negativity have an emotional need for order and sensitivity. That meant I needed to listen to my son's daily pessimistic report. My usual reaction was to try to talk Jake out of his negativity, but that wouldn't satisfy his need for sensitivity, so had to let him finish his complaints and ask what good things happened. Then I needed to wait until he could tell me. This would help lake realize that good things really were happening to him.

Para 1: One day, Jake came home, from school and complained as usual.

Para 2: From then on, Jake came to understand the power of seeing good points.

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