day 208 读后续写- 竞争中迷失自我,激情中重塑新生 (24.12 t8)

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今天和家长约谈解决学生问题,从11点到12点50。
虽然我提前把这篇文章写好了,但就差一步发表,结果被绊住了。
所以有些迟。不过还是决定先更新完再去吃饭。
其实这篇续写我很喜欢,尤其是在学生刚刚考完之后,有特别的教育意义。
主要就是劝那些一直和别人比较的学生,放下心魔,放过自己,转而将所有能量转移到对自己有益的事情上去,才是最自由的活法。
这篇续写的核心点就是如何安抚和规劝主角,让她意识到 比较带来的焦虑会冲淡成长带来的喜悦,转而将自己释放出来,寻找激情所在,并乐在其中。
这篇故事的结尾是我昨天晚上在床上看老友记的时候想到的。写完觉得很喜欢,故此分享给大家。
下面就是我的尝试,如你尚未读过题目day 207 读后续写- 光环之外,阴影之中 (24.12 t8),欢迎自己揣摩。
enjoy your read!

下面是我的续写尝试


Paragraph 1:With a hint of hurt and surprise in his eyes, Jack gently approached me.

"Lara," he began, his voice gentle but firm, "it might seem that way from the outside, but getting into Harvard was no stroll in a park. There were countless sleepless nights, moments of doubt, and sacrifices to make." "But you always make everything look so easy," I mumbled, hugging my knees tighter.Jack sighed, his gaze softening, “Lara, if I’d ever looked effortless, it’s because failure had taught me to replace the fruitless pursuit of perfection with the joy of growth and self-discovery.” The room felt smaller yet somehow more illuminated as his words sunk in. “This is your chance to break free.”

Paragraph 2:His words were like a warm breeze, blowing my depression away and changing my mindset.

I no longer felt the sting of envy; rather, I felt inspired. "Sorry, Jack," I whispered. Jack patted me on the back and returned to his book. From that day on, I began to approach my studies differently. By allowing myself to make mistakes, I finally figured out where my true passion lay, which led me to embrace the bumpy journey of learning. On a Saturday afternoon, Jack and I sat in the living room, reading. It was once difficult for me to focus, the pressure of his presence weighing heavily on me. But now, wrapped in a comforting glow, it dawned on me , "In rivalry, we lose ourselves; in passion, we be."

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