Charlene: Hi, Erin.
Erin: (flustered) Hi. Good, grand. Not too bad. Can't complain. Is the answer I'd have given if you'd asked how I was.
Charlene: Right. Are you signing up for Paris? I can't convince that lot to come. Looks like I'm going to need someone to hang out with.
Erin: It would be an honour.
Charlene: Okay. Well, I'll see you later, then. (walks away)
Erin: You will, Charlene. Indeed you will!
(Clare waves.)
Erin: (turning to friends) Did you hear that? The Charlene Kavanagh wants to hang out with little old me!
Clare: You know what I admire most about you, Erin? Your unshakeable principles.”
这个场景给我留下了如此深刻的印象，以至于我在写这篇续写的时候情不自禁就把Erin的话用了进去。
当然，这篇文章的结尾挺不好写的，我既想写出自信，又想和头发联系起来，所以还是额外费了一些心思。
下面我就把我的尝试分享给大家，如果你尚未读过题目 day 205 读后续写- 小山重叠金明灭（24.11 赤峰），大家可以先读，自行揣摩。
enjoy your read!
下面是我的续写尝试
Para 1: I turned around quickly, my heart racing with a mixture of surprise and curiosity.
"Is that really you, Susan?" she exclaimed, eyeing my new haircut with delight. "It looks amazing! You’ve got to come to the picnic this weekend. Everyone's going to be there!" I could hardly believe my ears. Catherine, the girl who always seemed to float above the rest of us, wanted to hang out with little old me. It was as if Old Tom's magic had instantly reshaped not only my appearance but the way others perceived me. I felt a flicker of confidence ignite within me, the little voice inside pushing through the layers of self-doubt to say, “Yes, I can be a part of this.”
Para 2: From that day on, my life began to change.
I embraced my uniqueness, smiling more and letting go of insecurity. At the picnic, I surprised myself by joining a group playing games, laughter filling the air. Then, I spotted a girl sitting alone, her eyes downcast, reminiscent of my former self. Amidst the fun, I remembered Old Tom reminding me that true beauty shines from within. Driven by a newfound sense of connection, I approached her, “Hey, would you like to sit with us?” When a broad smile blossomed on her face, suddenly, against the sunlight, I saw magic, in her hair.
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