在Chris的休息日和大家分享一篇往期精选的读后续写，来自23年山西一模。
这篇续写已收录在 Chris的满分续写指南中，欢迎大家订阅，练习哦
ps：本周的共读活动还有周三和周五两天，欢迎大家12:30加入会议。
午饭耽搁了一下。
先分享两件小事。
一：一模前我刚给学生整理了“如果不学习也能生活，那我们为什么要学习”的答案并且打印出来放在教室，结果第二天一模应用文就考了“如果手机什么都知道，我们为什么要学习？”
奇妙。难道这是在催促我猜测今年的高考题吗😂
二：年前我在网上买了几支腊梅泡在花瓶里，春节的时候正好开，很香。但是节后很快花就都落下来。昨天晚上回家后，我妈说寒假前我买的腊梅花枝又发新芽了。我撺掇我妈两个人赶紧把它移到了一个盆里，希望它能生根。
进入正题。
今天分享的这篇山西一模续写尝试又带我体验了一段奇妙的空中之旅，希望你也能喜欢。
如你尚未读过题目day 103 读后续写-山西一模 自由坠落，可以先读，自己揣摩。
enjoy your read!
我的续写尝试
Paragraph 1: We called American Automobile Association (AAA) and hoped for the best.
With every passing, excruciating minute, disapointment threatened to drown the day’s bubbling excitement. The possibility of us missing the jump after coming so close was almost unbearable. Then, suddenly, the rumble a tow truck sliced through the tension. With practiced efficiency, the driver swiftly changed our tyre, reigniting a silver of hope. After paying for his service, we dashed into the ablaze sunset. The moment we parked the car at the WNY, Denny and I exchanged a look. I saw, in his eyes, our initial disappointment had morphed into wild anticipation. (91 words)
Paragraph 2: We were informed we were the final jump of the night…the “sunset jump”.
As we soared skyward in the small plane, the anticipation only grew higher and higher until finally, taking a deep breath, we leapt out and plunged towards the earth. The adrenaline rush was unlike anything I had ever experienced. After the initial freefall, we were suspended, weightless, in an impossible sky, the world a breathtaking panorama of pinks, oranges, and purples bleeding into the approaching night. We were hurtling towards the ground, yes, but we were also flying. And for a brief, glorious moment, everything felt possible. (87 words)
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