day 200 读后续写- 跑出希望,听到新生 (24.11 成都)

文摘   2024-12-02 12:01   荷兰  

上周末一个成都石室中学文庙校区的高三小朋友给我发信息,说想让我写一下他们近期的一篇续写。我答应小朋友今天尝试。

这篇续写是难得的一篇立足于本土文化背景,讲述一个天生听力障碍的男子xiaowen 重获新生的故事。

作为作者,你会如何想象从未听到过这个世界声音的样子,如何第一次听到妈妈说话的感受?

ps:这个故事最后互联网好心人的情节,和我之前写过的太原模考Day 31 续写精析-飞入心中的“球” 也有相似之处。如感兴趣,可以一读。

下面我把题目分享给大家,欢迎大家一同思考。

enjoy your read!


下面是续写题目



"This is my first day delivering food."

"This is my second day of delivery."

Xiaowen posted his daily vlog online, in which he wore a contagious smile and stammered, "It is my 20th day of food delivery and I'm working hard to earn money for my cochlear implantation(耳蜗植入手术)!

Recognized as the only means to restore hearing and language ability for people with extremely severe neurological deafness, cochlear implantation involves conducting risky surgery where doctors will put a built-in device in the patient's head behind the car and fitting the patient with a wearable signal-receiving device, like an earphone, one month after the surgery. Meanwhile, it costs as high as 300,000 yuan, or over 100,000 yuan when social security reimburses part of it. In Xiaowen's case, it would mean 10 years of delivery when he just made approximately 100 yuan a day.

Worse still, hearing-impaired, Xiaowen had several narrow escapes with death at the intersection on the roads because he couldn't hear the horn of the cars behind him! He sighed with a heavy heart when customers complained about his inability to speak on the phone to inform them of the arrival of a delivery. Even so, Xiaowen kindly refused people's fat tips but accepted their apologies when they found out about his disability.

Born in an ordinary family, Xiaowen, the little chubby boy, was diagnosed with congenital hearing impairment. This was like a bolt from the blue, breaking the family's beautiful vision of Xiaowen's future.

But it didn't bring down Xiaowen's mother. Fearing that Xiaowen couldn't understand teachers' instructions, she was always patiently there to help him with lip-reading and guide him to express himself bravely. Thanks to mom, Xiaowen has grown into a self-reliant adult who wouldn't reap without sowing. One day, Xiaowen watched his mother singing and said with a lisp, "Mom, you must have the most beautiful voice in the world!"

"Dear, how I wish you could hear mommy and sing with me..." Mom eyed Xiaowen with tender love, a trace of sorrow flashing over her face. It would be just a long, long time before they could pay that much money.

Mr. B, a well-known blogger, is devoted to charity causes. He and his team happened to see Xiaowen's posts and they followed him online and decided to help him.

Para 1: Mr. B invited Xiaowen and his mom to his office and told them the good news.

Para 2: One month later, Xiaowen and his mom went to the hospital to try out the signal-receiving device.


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