英文写作:从写好这句话开始。

文摘   2024-11-14 15:29   美国  

Writing starts by Defining a word

写作涉及的要素太多:词汇、句子结构,内容细节、组织概括……。

常被讨论的话题包括:

从哪个层级开始练习,段落还是句子?

分不清主谓宾定状怎么办?

词汇量不够、语法错误一堆怎么办?

说和写怎样结合起来?

学生逻辑混乱、思维不够严谨”,怎么办?

脑子里没“料”怎么办?

……

最终的结果是:没办法,顺其自然咯。

不妨从“定义一个单词”开始。下面这个例子,就是针对新学单词advertise,看看如何define the word advertise——

实操案例:advertise  (S--student;  T--teacher)

Sadvertise... to show a product...online... to consumers 

Tif I just show this phone to you, am I advertising it?

Sto encourage them to buy it

Tto buy it, OK! Then, you said you “show” the product, but we don’t always see the product...

Sto introduce

TYes, introduce. So what do we introduce?

S...everything...

T(joking) everything is nothing

Sthe difference of a product from others

T: only difference?

S: functions, ...usage, emm...advantages and prices...

T: Use ONE word to cover all these words (write down “functions...”)

S: information

Tyes, information (cross and write on board). Only products? For example, I teach you, and you pay me money, what product did I provide?

S...service

Texactly right! Service. And then, in what way? Only Online?

Son TV, newspaper, and...

Temm, even on the bus, train, metro. Now, one more question...are you sure that it is to “consumers”?

Sthe public

TYes, “the public” or “people” (cross and write) . It is not until someone buys your product that we call him a “consumer”! The last question: encourage? Can I say “hey, you are a good boy, buy this phone!”? I am encouraging you.

Sattract

Texactly! Attract----or tempt (cross and write), tempt, the word we learnt yesterday. Now we’ve got the complete definition of “advertise”-----

To advertise is to introduce the information of a product or service through TV, on line or any other media, to the public, to attempt them to buy it. 

这是写作的一个关键环节:定义。

定义definition)指对某个概念(词语、短语或一组符号)进行的简要并完整的陈述,透过列出一个事件或者一个物件的基本属性,来描述、解释、说明、规范一个词语、一个概念、一个事物的意义。定义必须具备明确性完整性,以防止误解;定义应避免循环性笼统性情绪性,且最好不用相反词语来界定。


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