句子打开方式:为什么说这是个好句子
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2024-11-08 13:30
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以下句子来自学生习作。题目要求:根据所读文章“Occam's Razor”写出概要、或感想。(原文摘抄,有少许不恰当的,不影响理解,未作改动)For instance,when explaining other people’s behavior, such as a friend not responding to your message in a timely manner, one complex theory is that the friend may be ignoring you on purpose, or discussing bad things about you with others and not wanting to respond. Another simple explanation could be that your friend was too busy to read the message at the time. Following Occam’s Razor, choosing for simpler explanation will allow you to avoid being overly concerned and maintain good relationships.译文:例如,在解释其他人的行为时,比如朋友没有及时回复你的信息,一种复杂的理论是,朋友可能故意不理你,或者和别人讨论你的坏话而不想回复。另一种简单的解释可能是你的朋友当时太忙,没有时间阅读信息。根据奥卡姆剃刀理论,选择更简单的解释可以让你避免过分担心,保持良好的人际关系。好的文章,不论按什么标准看,都是好的。但“好”在哪里呢?按照SAT的标准(参考文后附表),从语言本身看,这句话至少满足了两点要求:Free of most errors in grammar, usage and mechanicsmeaningful variety in sentence structuremay be ignoring you on purpose, or discussing bad things about you with others and not wanting to respond(省略共同的may be + ignoring... or discussing... and not wanting...)when explaining other people’s behavior(when explaining =when one complex theory explains...)(1)choosing for simpler explanation will ...(2)to avoid being overly concerned(3)such as a friend not responding to your message in a timely manner例1:动名词主语=That one chooses...;例2:动词avoid + 动名词;being concerned可视为being+形容词、或concern的动名词被动式例3:介词such as +动名词;not responding是动名词的否定式(1)is that the friend may be ignoring you on purpose, or discussing bad things about you with others and not wanting to respond(2)could be that your friend was too busy to read the message at the time(1)was too busy to read the message at the time(2)allow you to avoid being overly concerned and maintain good relationshipsFollowing Occam’s Razor, , choosing for simpler explanation will分词词组following Occam’s Razor做句子的状语。这里following也被认为是介词(同样的如Considering..., Speaking of...,Given... )。
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