句子写作:规范化 + 信息含量

文摘   2024-09-13 11:00   美国  


这个练习设计的初衷:1、句法规范;2、信息量(idea)的生成

中式写作三大问题:

1、句子成分(主谓构造、定状的表现形式)

2、时态语态

3、主谓一致

【例子解析】

1True happiness does not consist in material wealth, but _____

主谓已给出,关注but后,缺并列宾语,故需要一个名词词组。

2To gain a deeper understanding of the effects of remote learning on student performance, _______, involving various educational studies and data analysis.

不定式分句做目的状语,involving分词分句做状语,均已给出,需要一个主谓结构。(时态则比较自由——完成、过去、将来均可)

3Despite the difficulties, ______

介词词组做状语已给出,需要主谓结构。根据前句时态has been facing,这里可用进行、将来;另注意she后动词的三单变化。

4After several complaints to the city council, ______

介词词组做状语已给出,需要主谓结构。根据前句时态has been,此处可用完成、将来;如主语为单数(比如noise)注意she后动词的三单变化。

5Participating in community service can significantly benefit both the volunteers and the people they help by ______

需掌握by doing这种结构。(但学生出错较多)

参考答案

46. rather in meaningful relationships and personal fulfillment

in finding joy in simple moments and nurturing close relationships.

in achieving personal growth and contributing to the well-being of others.

in pursuing passions and living in accordance with one's values.

in embracing life's challenges and celebrating small victories along the way.

47. the researchers will conduct research

the university will conduct a survey

48. she continues to practice every day and is determined to improve her skills

she continues to persist in practicing every day, even when progress seems slow

49. the construction work finally stopped

the construction noise finally ceased, bringing much peace to the neighborhood.

50. fostering a sense of connection and purpose

developing new skills and gaining valuable life experiences

making a positive impact on others’ lives

reducing stress and increasing feelings of happiness and purpose

educating others and advocating for change


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