我发现了一篇超棒的作文题:江浙高三联考应用文(喜恶与偏爱)

文摘   2024-10-22 19:28   浙江  

这是一道好题,它有四个亮点:

亮点1:人人有话说。话题与考生的生活高度相关(Relatability),大多数考生都曾有过类似的经历,即曾经热爱某项活动,但随着时间推移或因不同原因而放弃了。因此,考生可以更容易产生共鸣,有话可说。

亮点2:避免千人一面。开放性大,每个考生的爱好不一样,导致喜欢或放弃某个爱好的原因不一样。教师在阅卷过程中,就可以见到“百花齐放”的喜人局面。

亮点3:提示信息的形式创新。跟绝大多数的应用文题不一样的是,本题的关键提示信息是英文,需要考生自己阅读和解码(这个方式在江浙一点的中考命题中比较常见,大家不要小觑,杭州、南京、苏州、温州等一带的中考作文题难度要超过高考应用文的)。

亮点4:覆盖多个重要的考查要点。考查的主要时态有现在时和过去时;考查的语言项目有喜恶和偏爱、因果关系等。其中“喜恶和偏爱”是高考重点考查的一个语言项目,值得大家关注。

以下是官方给的范文:
I used to ride my bike a lot when I was a kid. At nine, I joined an after-school cycling club and regularly took part in races. Cycling would really bring a great sense of freedom.

However, after going to high school, I stopped it. After all, every day I had a lot more homework to do, and I rarely won races because I didn’t ride that fast.

Now I’ve got a new hobby—skateboarding! I can do it at any time, so it fits in better with school. It’s just as much fun as cycling, but I’m much better at skateboarding. 

个人觉得,以上官方范文适合重点偏向的学生参考。说实话,江浙一带卷得厉害,水涨船高,阅卷教师的胃口越来越高了。本文提供难度稍微大一点的范文供大家参考(尤其适合中等偏上的优秀生):

适合优秀生的高端范文】I used to find immense joy in表示喜恶与偏爱)roller skating, gliding effortlessly through the neighborhood streets, wind in my hair, and laughter in the air. It was my escape from daily routine. I reveled in表示喜恶与偏爱the freedom and exhilaration it brought.

However, as life became busier, skating took a backseat表示喜恶与偏爱. Responsibilities and commitments mounted, leaving little time for my beloved pastime表示喜恶与偏爱. Gradually, my skates gathered dust in the corner of my room.

Now, my leisure moments are filled with a different passion表示喜恶与偏爱- reading and writing. It's a new adventure, and though Imiss表示喜恶与偏爱the skating, I've found solace and inspiration in表示喜恶与偏爱the pages of books and the strokes of my pen.

以下是关于喜恶与偏爱”的更多资料

以下内容选自《高考英语作文秋季课程》(读后续写+应用文)友情提醒:三分之一核心内容在说课视频里,1/3在课件PPT中,其余1/3在纸质资料里。 

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