这是一道好题,它有四个亮点:
亮点1:人人有话说。话题与考生的生活高度相关(Relatability),大多数考生都曾有过类似的经历,即曾经热爱某项活动,但随着时间推移或因不同原因而放弃了。因此,考生可以更容易产生共鸣,有话可说。
亮点2:避免千人一面。开放性大,每个考生的爱好不一样,导致喜欢或放弃某个爱好的原因不一样。教师在阅卷过程中,就可以见到“百花齐放”的喜人局面。
亮点3:提示信息的形式创新。跟绝大多数的应用文题不一样的是,本题的关键提示信息是英文,需要考生自己阅读和解码(这个方式在江浙一点的中考命题中比较常见,大家不要小觑,杭州、南京、苏州、温州等一带的中考作文题难度要超过高考应用文的)。
亮点4:覆盖多个重要的考查要点。考查的主要时态有现在时和过去时;考查的语言项目有喜恶和偏爱、因果关系等。其中“喜恶和偏爱”是高考重点考查的一个语言项目,值得大家关注。
Now I’ve got a new hobby—skateboarding! I can do it at any time, so it fits in better with school. It’s just as much fun as cycling, but I’m much better at skateboarding.
个人觉得,以上官方范文适合重点偏向的学生参考。说实话,江浙一带卷得厉害,水涨船高,阅卷教师的胃口越来越高了。本文提供难度稍微大一点的范文供大家参考(尤其适合中等偏上的优秀生):
【适合优秀生的高端范文】I used to find immense joy in(表示喜恶与偏爱)roller skating, gliding effortlessly through the neighborhood streets, wind in my hair, and laughter in the air. It was my escape from daily routine. I reveled in(表示喜恶与偏爱)the freedom and exhilaration it brought.
However, as life became busier, skating took a backseat(表示喜恶与偏爱). Responsibilities and commitments mounted, leaving little time for my beloved pastime(表示喜恶与偏爱). Gradually, my skates gathered dust in the corner of my room.
Now, my leisure moments are filled with a different passion(表示喜恶与偏爱)- reading and writing. It's a new adventure, and though Imiss(表示喜恶与偏爱)the skating, I've found solace and inspiration in(表示喜恶与偏爱)the pages of books and the strokes of my pen.
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以下内容选自《高考英语作文秋季课程》(读后续写+应用文)友情提醒:三分之一核心内容在说课视频里,1/3在课件PPT中,其余1/3在纸质资料里。
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