汉诗英译(第27辑)我愿意用一生换一个句子

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汉诗英译·第27辑
译者 | 秦尊璐、游心泉、彼得·休斯
作者 | 陈翔、王少勇、何不言、苏仁聪、刘娜

博尔赫斯的月亮 
陈 翔

要有多少的黑暗与爱, 
才能写出这样的诗? 
我愿意用一生换一个句子①。 

今夜,我摘取和分配月亮。 
一个在天上,一个在纸上, 
一个在眼里,一个在手里。 

注:①即博尔赫斯的诗句“我给你一个久久地望着孤月的人的悲哀”。

Borges’ Moon
By Chen Xiang

How much darkness and love 
does it take to write a poem like this? 
I would give my life for just one line.1

Tonight I gather in the moons then share them –
One in the sky, one on paper; 
one in the eye, one in the hand. 

Poet’s Note: 1. Referring to Jorge Luis Borges’ poem line, “I offer you the bitterness of a man who has looked long and long at the lonely moon.”

游心泉、Peter Hughes 译



春夜在山桃树下 
王少勇

微风吹动枝条 
满天的山桃花在头顶闪烁 
白色花瓣照耀着我 
仿佛要听我说话 
仿佛已等待我很久 

四周的夜那么黑那么静 
所有词语都隐退到黑夜中 
我眼睛潮湿,胸脯颤抖 
就像曾经在雪山 
仰望星空 

风从天地间轻轻吹过

Under the Hickory Tree on A Spring Night
By Wang Shaoyong

When a gentle breeze stirs the branches 
a sky of peach blossom shimmers overhead
Their white petals shine on me
as if prepared to listen 
as if they’ve expected me for years

So dark, so quiet, the surrounding night
all words retreat into the darkness
My eyes are moist, my chest trembling  
just as once upon a time in the snowy mountains
I gazed into a night of stars

Gently the wind blows between heaven and earth

游心泉、Peter Hughes 译

光 
何不言

火车安静地开了很久,窗外 
夜色中突然炸开一团光。 
一晃而过,无声无息。 
车厢里昏昏欲睡的空气, 
突然热起来。我在年幼的夜晚 
负气出走,在村口无边的菜地里乱撞。 
青蛙扑通扑通跳进水沟,所到之处 
声音全部停止。 
安静下来,一个窸窸窣窣的声音 
贴着地面向我逼近。 
我哭得毫不犹豫。 
此时,一个手电远远地晃动,母亲 
大声叫唤我的名字, 
准备和整个黑暗搏斗。


Light

By He Buyan


Quietly the train continued its long journey

when suddenly a burst of light brightened the night

it vanished in a flash without a sound

The drowsy air of the carriage quickly lost its chill.

One night when I was a child

I ran away in anger, stumbling through

an endless field of crops at the edge of the village

Frogs plopped into ditches

and all sound stopped

Then through the silence a sound of rustling

close to the ground and approaching me

I cried out without thinking

and saw the moving flicker

a shaking flashlight in the distance,

my mother calling out my name –

she would challenge the whole of the darkness

秦尊璐、Peter Hughes  译


允许有人哭泣 

苏仁聪


允许吉他手哭吧 

他的音乐被装进铁盒子 

允许艺术家在地铁站卖艺 

重新涂刷广告 

允许失眠的人靠着扶杆睡一会儿 

他真的好累,还拉着行李箱 

这个城市太忙,我来了 

见到和上一次完全不同的人群 

他们把我拉上高架桥,又把我放在街边 

他们带着我穿过整个城市 

没有和我说一句话 

允许口若悬河的人变成哑巴 

允许内心愉悦的人失声哭泣 


Allow Someone to Cry

By Su Rencong


Allow the guitarist to cry

when his music is locked up in a steel box

Allow the artist to perform at the subway station

and to repaint the advertisement

Allow the insomniac to doze against the hand-rails

so exhausted, dragging a suitcase

The city's too busy and here I am

meeting complete strangers

They take me over a flyover and into a street

leading me through the city

saying nothing at all –

Allow the eloquent to fall silent

and allow the joyful to break down in tears


秦尊璐、Peter Hughes  译


一小片空地 

刘 娜


乡村的春天饱和度如此之高 

冲破浓郁的绿色回到玉竹坪我全身是汗 

玉兰花环拥的清水塘前 

老屋被修饰,贴上了深蓝色墙砖 

屋前不再适合跑跳 

方砖围成各种花圃 

在一片月见草的旁边 

奶奶,您和我漫无目的地交谈 

还有一小片空地 

您说,那里可以种点黄芪 

到时你带去,常喝黄芪提气 


奶奶,这个春天我充满沮丧 

命运的风从四个方向吹来 

不停歇地推搡和阻拦 

那一片空地还在 

我现在该种些什么


A Small Vacant Plot

By Liu Na


Spring saturates the countryside as I return perspiring

through the flourishing greenery to Yuzhuping

There’s the pond of clear water surrounded by magnolias

and the old house spruced up with dark blue tiles

but out front there is now no room to play

with the new raised beds all full of flowers

Next to a patch of evening primrose

Grandma and I chatted away the time of day

There's still another piece of vacant ground

You said, ‘I’ll plant some vetch, and you must take some with you,

drink vetch tea to keep your spirits strong’ 


Grandma, I'm so depressed this spring

The winds of fate blow in from all around

pushing and shoving

The vacant space remains there still

But what should I plant there now

秦尊璐、Peter Hughes  译

  国际诗人评论

Peter Hughes
 彼得·休斯 
李玥 译


本辑诗歌探讨了光明与黑暗、过去与现在、近与远的主题。我们也意识到了他人言辞于我们的重要意义,无论是祖母的话语,还是出自过去某位伟大作家的名句。第一首诗作是陈翔的《博尔赫斯的月亮》,在某种程度上,作者恰到好处地向20世纪阿根廷伟大作家豪尔赫·路易斯·博尔赫斯(Jorge Luis Borges)的作品表示了敬意。这首作品的短短六行诗句中囊括了很多内容。它同博尔赫斯的诗句一起,包揽了整个夜空。我们由此而知,诗歌源于文学范本和世界观感的融合,以及文化和亲身的经历与思考。另外,《博尔赫斯的月亮》也强调了神秘无解是创作和艺术的核心:


要有多少的黑暗与爱, 

才能写出这样的诗?  


我们本辑的第二首诗歌是王少勇的《春夜在山桃树下 》,仍然以夜晚作为背景。在这里,第一节中桃花的花瓣和第二节中遥远的星星之间的美妙反差令读者感到震撼。诗人表示,在情感强烈的时刻,我们会感受到,宇宙仿佛在等待人类的回应。而这样一首诗,就是人们给予春天盛开的花朵,以及繁星满天的夜空的响应。诗歌的节奏变化和第一行描述的“吹动枝条”的微风,将所有事物都联系在了一起,继而全部归于最后一行所叙的天地的连接当中。


白色花瓣照耀着我

仿佛要听我说话

仿佛已等待我很久


第三首诗是何不言的作品《光》。在诗歌的开头,一列火车在黑夜中穿行,突然,一道明亮的光将黑暗驱散开来。此刻,许多年前的童年记忆也被触发了。诗人负气从屋子里跑了出去,迷失在一片广阔的庄稼地里。陌生的黑暗环境和夜间的各种声响,吓坏了迷路的孩子。然而,突如其来的手电光亮,示意着一位忧心的母亲的到来,也预示着诗人即将安全舒适地回到家中。这首诗警示了我们童年经历的重要性,以及这些经历对于我们未来的影响。


安静下来,一个窸窸窣窣的声音

贴着地面向我逼近。

我哭得毫不犹豫。

此时,一个手电远远地晃动,母亲

大声叫唤我的名字,

准备和整个黑暗搏斗。


第四首诗来自苏仁聪创作的《允许有人哭泣》。这首诗从某种程度上传达了人们应抱有同理心,并与自己的另一面和解的需求。它也唤醒了我们被陌生人潮推动着,行走在大城市谋生的孤独感。


他们带着我穿过整个城市

没有和我说一句话

允许口若悬河的人变成哑巴

允许内心愉悦的人失声哭泣


第五首诗,也是最后一首诗,是刘娜的作品《一小片空地》。这是一首关于变化及其带来的挑战和机遇的诗歌。万事万物的更迭、变化能让冬天转变为春天,但也能让我们感受到这个世界似乎正在失去控制,而我们只能手无寸铁地接受超脱个人的力量和随机扭转的命运带来的结果:


奶奶,这个春天我充满沮丧

命运的风从四个方向吹来

不停歇地推搡和阻拦

那一片空地还在

我现在该种些什么

这个问题置于诗的最后,引发每位读者的思考与解答。


彼得·休斯

2023年2月于英国毕士达


This selection of poems explores the themes of light and dark, past and present, proximity and distance. We are also reminded of the importance of the words of others, whether they be those of a grandmother or those of a great writer from the past. The first piece, BorgesMoonby Chen Xiang, is in part a fitting tribute to the work of the great 20th-century writer from Argentina, Jorge Luis Borges. This poem manages to fit in a great deal in its short six lines. It embraces the night sky together with a text by Borges. The poem reminds us that poetry comes from a blend of literary models and observation of the world; culture as well as direct experience and contemplation. Yet BorgesMoonalso insists on the mystery at the heart of creation and art:


How much darkness and love

does it take to write a poem like this?


Our second poem, Wang Shaoyong’s ‘Under the Hickory Tree on a Spring Night’, stays with the nocturnal setting. This time the reader is struck by the beautiful contrast in scale between the petals of peach blossom in stanza one and the distant stars of stanza two. The poet suggests that in moments of intensified emotion, we feel as if the universe is awaiting  a human response. And the response from humanity to the spring blossom and the night sky full of stars is a poem such as this. Everything is connected by the rhythms of the poem, and by the breeze that ‘stirs the branches’ of the very first line, then returns in the final line connecting the earth and the heavens.


Their white petals shine on me

as if prepared to listen

as if they’ve expected me for years


The third poem is ‘light’ by He Buyan. We begin with a train travelling through the night and then the darkness is suddenly dispersed by a vivid burst of light. This moment triggers the memory of a childhood experience from years ago. The speaker had run from the house in a temper and ended up lost in a vast field of crops. The lost child was frightened by the unfamiliarity of the darkness and nocturnal noises. But then the sudden light of a torch signalled the arrival of a worried mother and the return of safety and comfort. The poem reminds us how crucial childhood experiences are, and how they shape our future.


Then through the silence a sound of rustling

close to the ground and approaching me

I cried out without thinking

and saw the moving flicker

a shaking flashlight in the distance,

my mother calling out my name –

she would challenge the whole of the darkness


Poem number four is ‘Allow Someone to Cry’ by Su Rencong. This text is in part a call for empathy and the reconciliation of opposites. It also evokes the loneliness of life in the big city in those moments when we feel swept along on  by a tide of strangers.


They take me over a flyover and into a street

leading me through the city

saying nothing  at all –

Allow the eloquent to fall silent

and allow the joyful to break down in tears


The fifth and final poem is Liu Na’s ‘A Small Vacant Plot’. This is a piece about change and the challenges it brings, as well as the opportunities involved. Change turns winter into spring, but it can also make us feel as though the world is spinning out of control, that we are merely victims of impersonal forces and random twists of fate:


Grandma, I'm so depressed this spring

The winds of fate blow in from all around

pushing and shoving

The vacant space remains there still

But what should I plant there now


The question is left hanging at the end of the poem for each reader to contemplate and answer.


Peter Hughes Bethesda
 February 2023



国际诗歌评论人 | 彼得·休斯

 

诗人、创意写作教师,现任英国剑桥康河出版社资深文学编辑、剑桥徐志摩诗歌艺术节编委。2013年,他的诗歌选集与《对特殊事物的直觉:彼得·休斯诗歌评论集》(‘An intuition of the particular’: some essays on the poetry of Peter Hughes)同时由Shearsman出版社出版。他根据意大利经典创作了《十分坦率》(Quite Frankly,Reality Street出版社)、《卡瓦尔康蒂》(Cavalcanty,Carcanet出版社)、《via Leopardi 21》(Equipage出版社)等众多充满创意的作品,广受好评。彼得是剑桥大学英语系朱迪斯·威尔逊诗歌基金获得者、客座专家,剑桥大学莫德林学院在诗歌领域的客座院士。近期出版的作品包括:2019年的《柏林雾沫》(A Berlin Entrainment,Shearsman出版社)、2020年的《毕士大星座》(Bethesda Constellations,蛎鹬出版社)等。



   栏目介绍   


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从2022年4月起,中国诗歌网与剑桥康河出版社合作开展汉诗英译工作。

翻译团队为剑桥康河诗社,它是英国剑桥康河出版社(Cam Rivers Publishing) 旗下的诗歌翻译与编辑团队,由英国国家学术院院士、剑桥大学社会人类学教授、剑桥徐志摩诗歌艺术节创始人艾伦·麦克法兰(Alan Macfarlane) 担任主席。团队由英国资深诗人与文学编辑彼得·休斯 (Peter Hughes)、露西·汉姆尔顿 (Lucy Hamilton),以及其他多位毕业于剑桥大学和其他知名高校的译者与学者组成。

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