惊艳雅思考官的表达,跟麦肯锡学习如何写作

2024-06-08 19:45   澳大利亚  

要学习,就要跟行业里顶尖的卖想法的大佬学习,今天提炼了一些麦肯锡的表达方式,学习起来哦!


01 xxx的话题,存在于xxx的背景,同时伴随着xxx的冲突,存在于xxx影响之中

Recent turbulence in the banking world comes against a backdrop of higher interest rates colliding with high leverage amid heightened geopolitical tensions

提炼一下:

  • comes against a backdrop of 在xxx的背景之下发生

  • collide with... 与xxx的冲突之下

  • amid... 存在于xxx之中



你看如果我们看这道2024年的大作文考题:

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

有些人认为最好是接受不好的情况,比如一份不满意的工作或缺钱。另一些人则认为,最好是尝试改善这种情况。讨论这两种观点并给出你自己的观点。

根据以上的句型,你可以这么给核心观点补充原因:

The belief that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money, comes against a backdrop of limited opportunities and economic instability amid rising living costs.

你还可以写相反的观点:

The argument that it is better to try and improve such situations comes against a backdrop of increasing educational opportunities colliding with the rise of entrepreneurship amid advancing technology and globalization.


02 最佳方案是什么,从xx到xx到xx?(表示你要讨论这三种情况)

What is the optimal course of action for stakeholders, from investors to financial institutions to policy makers?

提炼一下

  • What is the optimal course of action for... 对于xxx群体来说最佳方案是什么

  • from...to...to... 从xxx到xxx到xxx


这句话用上面那个作文题,个体的角度可以这么写:

What is the optimal course of action for individuals facing an unsatisfactory job or a shortage of money, from enduring their current circumstances to seeking new opportunities to enhancing their skills?

社会的角度可以这么写:

What is the optimal course of action for society, from supporting those who accept their situation to creating pathways for individuals striving to improve their conditions to fostering an environment of economic growth and stability?


03 A and B 在这几十年间盛行,为xxx的发展做了基础

Weak investment and excess saving have prevailed over the past several decades, underpinning expansion of the global balance sheet. 

提炼一下

  • xxx have prevailed over the past several decades xxx的观点在这几十年间盛行

  • underpin 推动了xxx/为xxx打下基础


还是用以上的雅思大作文考题,你可以这么写:

Efforts to improve personal situations and strive for better opportunities have prevailed over the past several decades, underpinning advancements in career development and overall economic prosperity.


04 这xxx背后的系统性的力量有可能改变,不过这是一个不确定和值得探讨的话题。

It is possible that the more structural forces behind high savings and weak investment will themselves shift, although this remains a matter of uncertainty and debate.

提炼一下

  • It is possible that the more structural forces behind...will themselves shift 这xxx背后的系统性的力量有可能改变

  • although this remains a matter of uncertainty and debate 不过这是一个不确定和值得探讨的话题

用上边那道雅思大作文题目,你可以这么写:

It is possible that the more structural forces behind the drive to improve one’s situation and seek better opportunities will themselves shift, although this remains a matter of uncertainty and debate.


05 A和B,影响了所有人但并不是一样的方式/程度,现在受C和D的影响

Superstar dynamics and globalization, which lifted incomes for all but not in the same way for everyone, are being exposed to changing domestic and global politics and rules.

用上边那道雅思大作文题目,你可以这么写:

Efforts to improve personal situations and seek better opportunities, which have lifted the prospects for many but not equally for everyone, are being influenced by evolving educational and professional landscapes.


06 传统的想法认为xxxx。但是在xxx有一些不同的差距,xx没有按照传统的想法行事,而是....; 这就是所谓的xxxx

The conventional view holds that households accumulate wealth to prepare for retirement and then run down savings in retirement. But, with some variation across countries, households have not been spending savings as much as the conventional argument suggests, rather keeping capital as precautionary savings and to be inherited by their offspring; this is the so-called retirement savings puzzle.

用上边那道雅思大作文题目,你可以这么写:

The conventional view holds that individuals should accept unsatisfactory jobs or financial hardship as a means of maintaining stability and security. But, with some variation across societies, many people have not been conforming to this view as much as expected, rather seeking to improve their situations and achieve better living conditions; this is the so-called resilience puzzle.


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