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展开细节是指在叙述一个事件或情境时，通过补充更多的细节来让叙述更加生动、详尽、有趣，让读者能够更加深入地理解和感受故事中的情境和人物。细节描写是记叙文情节的基本构成单位。成功的细节描写会让读者印象深刻，提高文章的可传读性。

好词好句记表达

（一）人物细节描写

1、动作细节描写：

The boy ran as fast as he could, his legs moving quickly and his arms pumping up and down.

男孩尽可能快地跑，他的腿快速移动，他的手臂上下摆动。

2、神态外貌细节描写：

The little girl had big, bright eyes that sparkled with excitement as she played with her toys.

小女孩有一双明亮的大眼睛，当她玩玩具时，眼睛闪烁着兴奋的光芒。

The man had a beard and wore glasses, with a friendly smile that lit up his face.

这个男人留着胡子，戴着眼镜，脸上露着一抹友好的微笑。

The man was wearing a black suit and tie, with shiny black shoes and a neatly trimmed beard.

那个男人穿着黑色西装，打着领带，穿着锃亮的黑色鞋子，留着修剪整齐的胡子。

3、心理细节描写：

The woman felt nervous and scared as she stepped onto the stage, her heart racing and her palms sweaty.

这位女士走上舞台时感到紧张和害怕，心跳加速，手心冒汗。

The man was feeling happy and content, with a sense of satisfaction that came from a job well done.

这名男子感到快乐和满足，因为工作完成得很好而心满意足。

（二）环境细节描写

借助修辞、动静结合、虚实相生、感官（视觉、听觉、嗅觉、味觉、触觉）、层次（远近、点面、上下、俯仰等）、色彩、对比等方法使描写更加生动。

1、自然环境细节描写：

The moon was held up above the sky, shining her soft and charming moonlight. Twinkling stars were blinking, and fragrant breeze gently stroked my head, as if making all the tiredness along the trip disappear.

月亮高挂在空中，投下柔和迷人的月光。耀眼的星星在闪烁，芬芳的微风轻抚着我的头，仿佛消除了旅途中所有的疲劳。

The park was a peaceful place, with tall trees providing shade and a gentle breeze blowing through the grass.

公园是一个宁静的地方，大树成荫，微风吹过草地。

2、社会环境细节描写：

The party was filled with laughter and chatter, with people socializing and enjoying each other's company.

聚会充满了笑声和闲聊，人们相互交流，享受着彼此的陪伴。

The restaurant was crowded, with waiters rushing back and forth and customers laughing and enjoying their meals.

餐厅里挤满了人，服务员们来回走动，忙个不停，顾客们笑着享受饭菜。

（更多内容请见《读后续写语料掌中宝》）

续写技巧学表达

（一）注重逻辑，厘清顺序

细节可根据上下句的逻辑关系或按事件发展的时间顺序来展开，让读者更好地全面了解事情发生的过程。

Suddenly, a gust of wind swept through the fields, rustling the leaves and causing them to dance in the fading light.

突然，一阵狂风刮过田野，树叶沙沙作响，在渐渐消逝的光线中起舞。

As the sun began to set, the sky turned shades of pink and orange. The birds sang their final songs of the day and flew back to their nests. The air grew cooler and the sound of crickets filled the silence. Gradually, the streetlights flickered on, lighting up the path ahead.

夕阳西下，天空呈现出粉色和橙色调。鸟儿们唱完一天最后的歌，然后飞回了巢里。空气变凉了，蟋蟀的叫声打破了寂静。渐渐地，街灯闪烁着亮起，照亮了前面的道路。

牛刀小试

完成句子。

① 午夜的钟声敲响了，街道上空无一人，笼罩在诡异的寂静中，只有远处一只孤独的猫头鹰的声音打破了沉寂。

As the clock struck midnight , the streets were deserted, enveloped in an strange silence broken only by the distant sounds of a lone owl.

② 当白天开始结束，太阳在操场上投下长长的阴影时，孩子们迅速收拾好东西回家吃晚饭。

As the day started to end and the sun cast long shadows on the playground, kids quickly gathered their things and went home to eat dinner.

（二）写出连贯的动作，延长过程

描写一个人的动作时可以把一个大动作分解成几个小动作，一一进行叙述。

She carefully lifted the heavy box off the ground, shifting her weight to maintain balance, and then slowly straightened her back, adjusting her grip.

她小心地把沉重的箱子从地上抬起，调整重心以保持平衡，然后慢慢地挺直了背，调整了握持的方式。

She carefully removed the lid from the jar, twisting it slowly to avoid spilling its contents, and then set it aside on the kitchen counter.

她小心翼翼地取下罐子的盖子，慢慢地扭开以避免溢出，然后将它放在厨房台面上。

牛刀小试

完成句子。

她小心翼翼地展开信件，手微微颤抖着，满怀期待，她的眼睛扫过页面上的文字，感受着失散多年的朋友发来的真挚信息。

She carefully unfolded the letter, her hands trembling slightly with anticipation, her eyes sweeping the words on the page as she absorbed the heartfelt message from her long-lost friend.

（三）详写重点，不要面面俱到

细节展开应该选择事情发生过程中最重要的一个方面着重描写，辅以其他描写角度。如果把事情发生前、中、后的情况全都原原本本地记录下来，文章就没有重点，篇幅冗长，乏味而平淡。

With a cautious step, she followed the rocky path, her hiking boots gripping the uneven terrain as she climbed higher up the mountain, the breathtaking view of the valley below motivating her to reach the summit.

她小心翼翼地沿着布满岩石的小路往上爬，旅行靴稳稳踩在不平坦的地面上，山下山谷的壮丽景色激励着她到达山顶。

牛刀小试

完成句子。

他非常兴奋，撕开了装着录取通知书的信封。他飞快地看着纸上的字，心跳得很快。终于他逐渐意识到自己的梦想即将实现。

Feeling very excited, he tore open the envelope with his acceptance letter inside. With his heart beating fast, he looked quickly at the words on the page. Finally, he came to realize that his dream was coming true.

（四）多维角度，丰富层次

展开细节可以从多维角度描写入手，比如写事件或人物可以动静结合，也可以直接和间接描写相结合。

With a sense of anticipation, he carefully peeled the wrapping off the gift, his fingers trembling slightly with excitement, a smile spreading across his face as he revealed the thoughtful present inside.

他满怀期待小心翼翼地撕开礼物的包装纸，手指因为兴奋而微微颤抖，当他揭开里面贴心的礼物时，脸上露出了微笑。

牛刀小试

完成句子。

她带着顽皮的微笑，悄悄地走进房间，她踩在柔软的地毯上，悄无声息地靠近她哥哥的床。她打算捉弄他时，眼睛里闪烁着淘气的光芒。

With a naughty smile, she quietly walked into the room , her steps making no sound on the soft carpet as she got closer to her brother's bed. Her eyes sparkled with mischief as she planned to play a trick on him .

（五）运用修辞，生动传神

通过比喻、象征等修辞来增强细节叙述的意境和感受，让读者更深入地理解故事中的情境和人物。

With a smile as bright as the sun, Emily danced through the meadow, her laughter like the sweet melody of a songbird, each twirl and leap a celebration for life's beauty.

艾米丽的笑容如太阳般灿烂，她在草地上跳舞，笑声如同一只鸟儿唱出的甜美旋律，每一次旋转和跃动都是对生活美好的庆祝。

牛刀小试

完成句子。

奶奶的声音如同微风一般轻柔，她的话语像是在寒冷的冬夜里给我裹上一条温暖的毯子，让我感到安全和安慰。

With a voice as soft as a light breeze, Grandma's words were like a warm blanket wrapped around me on a cold winter's night, making me feel safe and comforted.

步步提升练表达

（一）完成句子

①当第一片雪花悠闲地从天空飘落下来，将大地覆盖在柔软的白色外衣中时，孩子们迅速跑到外面，他们的笑声在宁静的社区中回荡。

As the first snowflake drifted lazily from the sky, , children raced outside, their laughter echoing through the quiet neighborhood.

②埃米莉跑完了她的第一次马拉松，脸上洋溢着成功的笑容。她的腿很酸，但她为自己所做的感到骄豪。

With a big smile of success on her face, Emily reached the end of her first marathon. Her legs were sore, but she .

③夕阳西下，天空变成了橘黄色和粉红色，莎拉坐在门廊的秋千上，回忆着她小时候在乡下度过的快乐时光。

As the sun went down, , Sarah sat on the porch swing, remembering the fun times she had as a kid in the countryside.

（二）请按照要求写场景，每个场景2-4句。

①救援人员照料受伤的登山者（评估受伤情况并实施急救→稳定状况→送院治疗）

The rescuers attended to the wounded climber with utmost care.

②偶遇一位久未谋面的朋友（初见时的惊讶和怀疑→认出后的开心兴奋→互相拥抱，诉说往事）

Coming across a long-lost friend could be an incredibly joyful and heartwarming experience.

（三）语篇填空

When I was a young boy, my father and I used to go fishing together every weekend. All the details of our first fishing trip are still fresh in my memory.

As we arrived at the lake, ① （父亲为我们精心挑选了一个钓鱼的好地方）. He explained to me that the best place to catch fish was near the rocks at the edge of the lake. ② （他还教我如何正确地在鱼钩上放诱饵和放线）.

At first, we didn't have much luck. But my father remained patient and kept encouraging me to keep trying. ③ （他叮嘱我保持静止和安静，并观察任何水动的迹象）.

Suddenly, I felt a sudden hard pull on my line. A fish! I quickly reeled the fish in, but it was fighting hard. ④ （父亲冷静地指导我完成整个过程，告诉我什么时候收放线，如何让鱼筋疲力尽）.

Finally, after what seemed like an eternity, I caught a glimpse of the fish at close quarters—it was a huge one! ⑤ （父亲迅速抓起渔网，帮我把它捞上来）. It was a beautiful rainbow trout, and it was the biggest fish I had ever caught.

I was overjoyed, and my father was beaming with pride. I would always remember the lessons learned from this experience.

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（一）完成句子:

①blanketing the ground in a soft white coat

②felt proud of what she had done

③the sky turning orange and pink

（二）场景续写:

①They assessed the climber's injuries and provided immediate first aid. They worked together to ensure the best possible outcome for the climber. After stabilizing his condition, they carefully moved him into the ambulance with a stretcher and took him to hospital for further treatment.

②At first, there was a moment of surprise and doubt. Then, as we recognized each other, there was an explosion of happiness and excitement. We hugged each other tightly and exchanged stories about what had happened in our lives since we last saw each other.

（三）语篇填空：

①my father carefully selected a perfect spot for us to fish

②He also instructed me how to properly bait my hook and cast my line

③He told me to keep still and quiet, and to watch the water for any signs of movement

④My father calmly coached me through the process, telling me when to reel the fish in and out and how to tire it out

⑤My father quickly grabbed the net and helped me bring it in

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