第二节 应用文写作
44.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到中国运动员闪耀巴黎奥运会，并请你介绍此届奥运会上你最喜欢的一名运动员。请你给Jim回信，内容包括:
1.简要介绍该运动员;
2.该运动员对你的影响。
注意:
(1) 词数100左右;
(2) 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
[答案]
Dear Jim,
l am delighted to receive your letter and would like to introduce my favorite athlete of the Paris Olympics, Pan Zhanle. Pan Zhanle, who is only 20 years old this year, is the world and Olympic record holder for men ' s 100m freestyle and 4X 100m medley relay at the 2024 Paris Olympics. Pan Zhanle has become the " fastest swimmer in the world " at such a young age.
Pan Zhanle's impressive achievements tell me that a strong youth leads to a strong
nation " . I am determined to learn from him. Working hard to master knowledge and strengthening my body are my primary tasks at present. Starting from achieving a small goal, I will gradually realize my aspirations.
Yours,
Li Hua
[解析]
[导语]本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jim写封回信，向他介绍此届奥运会上最喜欢的一名运动员，以及该运动员对自己的影响。
[详解] 一.词汇积累
1、收到某人的来信:
receive one’s letter→hear from sb.
2、愿意做某事:
would like to do一be willing to
3、下决心做某事:
be determined to do→make up one’S mind to do
4、志向，愿望
aspirations - + dreams/ambitions
二.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Starting from achieving a small goal, I will gradually realize my aspirations.
拓展句: If Istarted from achieving a small goal, I will gradually realize my aspirations.
[点睛]
[高分句型 1] Pan Zhanle, who is only 20 years old this year, is the world and Olympic record holder for men ' s 100m freestyle and 4X 100m medley relay at the 2024 Paris Olympics. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
(高分句型 2] Pan Zhanle ' s impressive achievements tell me that " a strong youth leads to astrong nation
(运用了that引导宾语从句)
