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"Every encounter is a surprise"
My heart is drenched in wine,
you'll be on my mind.
这是HENRY老师的第286篇原创
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2024中考近在咫尺（just around the corner），
许多教师，家长和学生对如何攻克作文这个霸道总裁如何深感迷茫（feel at a loss），
怎么实现弯道超车（corner overtaking）？
如何考试完成后体验“两岸猿声啼不住，轻舟已过万重山。”
而不是“念天地之悠悠，独怆然而涕下”？
注入灵魂：“乘风破浪会有时，直挂云帆济沧海。”
相信各位经过努力一定能凤凰涅槃，
阳光一定会地肆意地洒在你的身上（every inch of your skin），既慷慨又大方。
来一抹“繁花”宝总（胡歌）的迷人微笑~
今天Henry老师带大家一起巧妙解读（ have an in-depth analysis）
如何应对图表类应用文（practical text）？
看到多模态文本，给各位解析一下：
看完瞬间有“内卷天花板”，不，会感觉命运的齿轮开始转动！
前方究！极！核！能！！！
（24虹口模考）
Dear Miss Liu,
I’m Li Hua, a student who shows i____1____ in the activities about labor education.
分析：开门见山，直入主题
亮点 1 . 定语从句 2. 表达：喜欢 show i_____1_____ in = be fond of =be keen on = be interested in
I will share my opinions with you.
分析：深度思考：为什么写opinions不写reasons ？？？
First of all, I’m willing to join the program called ‘The Joy of Harvest’simply because students living in cities s_____2____ have the experience of farming.
分析：be willing to 可以替换want to /would like to/ am eager to ；simply because 表示：只因, 拓展iKun：只因你太美！！！
We can hardly i_____3_____ how glad farmers feel when harvesting the crops.
The meaningful and unforgettable e______4______ will absolutely leave us a deep impression.
分析：理由陈述，详实丰富。
leave us a deep impression 给我们留下深刻印象,需要bear in mind!!!
What’s more, I recommend that we should d______5_____ more activities.
For example, we can invite some experts to give us speeches about agriculture.
Besides, we can also invite farmers to share their working experience so that students can gain more knowledge which never a_____6_____ on the textbooks.
分析：活动安排，新颖别致
作文需要从理论---实践即作文输出，达到运用自如
文章需要长短句结合，比如 ….so that… 目的状语从句用的非常出色。
In this way, more students will be fond of farming and learn to cherish food and life.
分析：升华主旨，拔高立意。
I sincerely hope my suggestions can be a______7______ and I’m definitely looking forward to your reply.
分析：结尾诚恳，完美收官。
注意，用hope不用wish，因为wish与事实相反，比如I wish you health and happiness forever.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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