高中英语读后续写靓丽开头和高分副词的使用

情感   2024-11-12 23:59   云南  


六招高分开头技巧

招: 非谓语开头

Lookingaround him cautiously, he slipped into the room and softly closed the door.他小心翼翼地环顾四周,溜进了房间,轻轻地关上门。 

Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another night. 简感到失望,不得不再呆一夜。

Feeling refreshed,she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.她感到神清气爽,继续沿着小溪散步,寻找出去的路。

第二招:形容词短语开头

Curious to know what was inside,he tiptoed into the dark cave.他好奇地想知道里面是什么,踮着脚尖走进了黑暗的洞穴。

Unable to say a word,he was rooted to the spot.一句话也说不出来,他就楞在了原地。

Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.突然,一只小兔子跳到了我的马前。

Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature,I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.  我害怕我会伤害这个可爱的小生物,我自动发出一声喊叫来阻止我的马。

文章给的提示句是:We had no idea where we were and it got dark.我们不知道自己在哪里,天变黑了。

Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back. 我又累又饿,想知道我们能不能找到回去的路。

招:副词开头

Carefully,he stepped over all the broken glass.他小心翼翼地踩过了所有的碎玻璃。

Joyfullyhe skipped up the street.他很高兴地跳过了街道。

Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. 立刻,一片黑暗笼罩着森林。

第四招:对话或独白开头

“Let’s see who gets there first!”Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny.“让我们看看谁先到那里去!瑞秋一边叫着,一边飞快地蹬着车从珍妮身边冲过去。

"Get into thecar." Paul shouted at Mac.  “上车!” 保罗对麦克喊道。

第五招:背景描写

We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way(我们开车穿过了几个州,沿途看到了很多好风景。)

I looked out of the car window, winding rivers, lofty mountains, sunny beaches and deep valleys,holding me entirely in their fascination. 

我望着车窗外,蜿蜒的河流,高耸的山脉,阳光明媚的海滩和深邃的山谷,完全吸引了我的注意力。

第六招:行为描写

Furrystarted wagging his tail and running around in circles when he saw his master taking a leash out from the drawer. Furry was all ready for his evening walk.

当他看到他的主人从抽屉里拿出一条皮带时,Furry开始摇,绕着圈跑。Furry准备好了晚上的散步。

Dad exchanged a glance with me. Why not camp to satisfy Mom?   爸爸和我相互看了一眼。 为什么不露营来满足妈妈?

对点精练==汉译英

第一招:非谓语开头

1.听到外面的吵闹声,她悄悄地打开窗户往外看。

_____________________________, she cautiously opened the window and peeked out.

2.感到紧张,他深吸了一口气,然后走进了面试室。

_____________________________, he took a deep breath and then walked into the interview room.

第二招:形容词短语开头

1.困惑不解,他再次审视了这个问题。

____________________________, he examined the problem once again.

2.对于即将到来的旅行充满兴奋,他开始收拾行李。

_____________________________, he began to pack his luggage.

第三招:副词开头

1.耐心地,老师一遍又一遍地解释这个复杂的概念。

____________________________, the teacher explained the complex concept over and over again.

2.突然,一道闪电划破了夜空,接着是一声巨响。

____________________________, a flash of lightning cut through the night sky, followed by a loud crash.

第四招:对话或独白开头

1.我们一定要赢这场比赛!队长在比赛前鼓舞士气。

____________________________ the captain exclaimed, boosting the team's morale before the game.

2.请保持安静,图书管理员轻声说,希望读者们不要说话。

____________________________ the librarian whispered, hoping the readers would stop talking.

第五招:背景描写

1.我们乘坐火车穿越了乡村,沿途看到了美丽的田野和宁静的村庄。

We took the train through the countryside, seeing ____________________________.

2.夜幕降临,街道上的路灯开始亮起,给城市增添了一种温馨的气氛。

As evening fell, the streetlights began to glow, ____________________________.

第六招:行为描写

1.看到他的朋友在操场上挥手,汤姆立刻跑过去加入他们。

Seeing his friend waving on the playground, ____________________________.

2.注意到门后有动静,她迅速转身,准备面对任何可能的危险。

答案:Noticing a movement behind the door, she____________________________any possible danger.

高分副词使用

组高分副词

(有些单词在中文中意思差不多,在英文中还是有差异的,请同学们多查看英语解释和常用搭配。)

1.轻轻地;悄悄地(walk/close the door) quietly  

2.轻轻地(sway/tremble)slightly

3.轻轻地softly(rain/wind) /gentlynot violently

4.温柔地;和蔼地mildly/ gently   

5.谦虚地modestly [来源:Z|xx|k.Com]

6.沉默地speechlessly /dumbly     

7.感激地gratefully

8.迅速地swiftly     [来源:学科网]

9.坚定地firmly/determinedly  

10.勇敢地bravely        

11.热情地;热烈地warmly

12.和蔼地kindly        

13.渴望地;热切地eagerly  

14.害羞地;内向地shyly     

15.仔细地closely

16.专心地attentively  

17.舒服地comfortably  

18.考虑周到地;体谅地considerately    

19.故意地deliberately  

20.慷慨地generously         

21.凶猛地;凶狠地;愤怒地fiercely

22.怀希望地hopefully       

23.仁慈地mercifully

24.快乐地;愉快地

(smile) /brightly / cheerfully

25.绝望地;拼命地desperately

26.大声地 loudly

27.友好地;礼貌地pleasantly

 

组高分副词运用

1.She grinned at me _________(害羞地), her eyes sparkling.

2.The audience listened to the lecture _________.(专心地)

3.He was _________(故意地)trying to upset her.

4.The detective watched him _________(仔细地), waiting for a reply. 

5.He was treated _________.(仁慈地)

6.'Morning!' she called _________.(快乐地)

7.If you're all sitting _________(舒适地), then I'll begin.

8.Please give _________(慷慨地)to the refugee fund.

9.'Will there be any food left over?' he asked _________.(满怀希望地)

10.He treats everyone equally and _________.(体谅他人地)

11. He looked round _________(拼命地)for someone to help him. [

12.He walked _________(迅速地)towards home down the dark street.

13.She smiled _________.(愉快地)[来源:学科网ZXXK]

14.“I'll do the dishes,”he said _________.(友好地;礼貌地)

15._________(勇敢地)he went into the burning house

16.The trees swayed _________(轻轻地)in the breeze.

17.For a few seconds she gazed _________(沉默地;一声不啃地)at him.

18.Terry greeted the visitor _________.(热情地)

19.“Of course I don't mind,” she answered _________.(和蔼地;温柔地)

20.They're _________(渴望地)awaiting the big day.

21.He stood up soundlessly and _________(沉默地;一声不啃地)and glided across the hallway and through a door.

22.He swayed _________(轻轻地), as if about to fall.

23.'I can manage,' she said _________.(坚定地)

24.'I was just lucky,' he said _________.(谦虚地)

25. The authors _________(感激地)acknowledge your financial support.

26.Rosa shut the door _________.(轻轻地)

27.Music played _________(轻轻地)in the background.

28.The dog looked at her ____________(凶狠地).

第二组高分副词

1.有礼貌地politely    

2.真诚地sincerely      

3.熟练地skilfully  

4.欲睡地sleepily      

5.伤心地 sadly

6.宽容地tolerantly  

7.考虑周到地、若有所思地thoughtfully  

8.温顺地meekly        

9.偷偷地(meet/leave) secretly

10.默默地silently      

11.自信地confidently

12.耐心地patiently      

13.自豪地proudly  

14.热心地;热情地;非常感兴趣地enthusiastically

15.尽情地;由衷地;发自内心heartily  

16.同情地sympathetically    [来源:XXK]

17.赞美地;钦佩地admiringly

18.紧紧地 tightly   

19.小心谨慎地cautiously

20.好奇地curiously      

21.严肃地;认真地seriously   

22.痛苦地(身体)painfully  

23.非常伤心地;痛苦地;悲痛地(心理);sorrowfully

24.非常伤心失望地;怨恨地;bitterly

 

第二组高分副词运用

1.Robyn swallowed _____________( 痛苦地 ).

2.'What have you got in there?' Felix asked _____________( 好奇地 ).

3.'Can I help you?' she asked _____________( 礼貌地 ).

4.'A lot of damage has already been done,' he said _____________(悲痛地).

5.We are _____________(真诚地) grateful for your help.

6.It's time we talked _____________(严肃地) about our relationship.

7.'All right,' said Neil _____________(温顺地).

8.He complained _____________(非常伤心失望地) about his exam grades.

9.He stared _____________(若有所思地) out the window.

10.He can play soccer _____________(熟练地).

11.She lay on the sofa _____________(恹恹欲睡地).

12.Was she _____________( 严重地 ) hurt?

13.He had _____________( 考虑周到地 ) brought with him some food to share.

14.He reacts rather _____________( 容忍地 ) toward his son's juvenile behavior.

15.Hugh laughed _____________(尽情地) at the joke.

16.The children _____________( 偷偷地 ) went to the movies when they were supposed to be at the library.

17.They discussed the question _____________( 热心地、热烈地).

18.We welcomed her _____________( 热情地 ).[来源:##Z#\

19.He sat _____________( 一言不发地 ) by the bed.

20.Carla smiled _____________( 自信地 ) at the cameras.

21.He waited _____________( 耐心地 ) for Katherine to speak.

22.He looked at his professor _____________( 钦佩地 ).

23.She _____________( 自豪地 ) displayed her prize.

24.The government responded _____________( 谨慎地 ) to the move.

25.He listened to her _____________( 同情地 ) and comforted her.

组高分副词

1.拼命地;发疯般地  (work/run) crazily=like crazy

2.随意地; 漫不经心地;粗心大意地;马虎地carelessly

3.随意地; 漫不经心地casually[来源:Z_xx_k.Com]

4.狂跳(heart) beat wildly  

5.欢呼cheer wildly   

6.急切地四处张望look wildly around

7.(态度)冷淡地 coldly  

8.猛烈地;剧烈地(shake/tremble/shiver) violently

9.无助地helplessly    

10.尴尬地;难为情地awkwardly /embarrassedly;

11.笨拙地clumsily

12.茫然地blankly  

13.贪婪地greedily

14.不情愿地reluctantly/ unwillingly

15.怀疑地doubtfully  

16.激动地、兴奋地excitedly

17.迟钝地; 呆笨地dully

18.绝望地;无望地hopelessly      

19.憎恨地hatefully    

20.后悔地;遗憾地 regretfully

21.粗鲁地;无礼地rudely  

22.不安地; 紧张地 uneasily/restlessly/nervously  

23.粗暴地(push/grabbed sb) roughly

24.严厉地 (punish/say) severely/ sternly

25.固执地  stubbornly[来源:§§]

 

组高分副词运用

1.His heart was beating ______________(疯狂地).

2.She nodded her head ______________(呆呆地), thinking about something else.

3.After much thought, we ______________(不情愿地)agreed.

4.“Well, what can I do for you?” he asked ______________(冷淡地).

5.She was rushing around ______________(拼命地)trying to put out the fire.

6.She threw her coat ______________(随意地)onto the sofa.

7.Anna stared ______________(茫然地)at the wall.

8.They waited there ______________(不安地)for a long time.

9.Several people have been ______________(猛烈地)attacked in the subway.

10.'I'm very sorry about your sister,' he said ______________(难为情地).

11.Marty always bumped into things ______________(笨拙地).

12.`I must die,' he said ______________(绝望地).

13.He grabbed the bottle and drank ______________(贪婪地).

14.'Stop behaving like a fool!' she said ______________(严厉地).

15.They watched ______________(无助地)as their home went up in flames.

16.Gerald shook his head ______________(怀疑地).

17.The audience cheered______________(欢呼).

18.I was still trembling ______________(剧烈地).

19.Someone had ______________(粗心大意地;马虎地)left a window open.

20.‘You will get punished one day,’ he said ______________(憎恨地).[来源:学科网ZXXK]

21.He pushed her ______________(粗暴地)out of the way.

22.'I don't care,' she said ______________(固执地).

23.She looked ______________(急切地)around for an escape.

24.'What do you want?' she asked ______________(粗鲁地).

25.People had gathered and were talking ____________(兴奋地).

26.____________(遗憾地), we do not have time to continue this discussion now.

组高分副词

1.犹豫不决地 hesitantly

2.不耐烦地 impatiently

3.无怜悯地;残忍地 mercilessly /cruelly

4.闷闷不乐地 moodilyunhappily    

5.虚弱地;微弱地 weakly

6.生气地 angrily

7.害怕地;恐惧地 (run away/scream) fearfully

8.羡慕地;嫉妒地 enviously

9.焦虑地、不安地、担忧地 anxiously  

10.有力地;坚定地 firmly

11.担忧地;着急地 worriedly  

12.出乎意料地;意外地unexpectedly

13.困惑地confusedly

14.忠诚地;一心一意地 devotedly

15.赞美地;钦佩地 admiringly

16.失望地 disappointedly

17.高兴地 delightedly          

18.感兴趣地  interestedly

19.满意地  contentedly

20.匆忙地  hurriedly

21.疲倦地 tiredly/ wearily

22.天真地innocently  

23.安全地safely

24.坚定地;坚决地 determinedly

25.钟爱地;深情地 lovingly

 

组高分副词运用

1.She glanced ____________(害怕地)over her shoulder.[来源:,,

2.His friends teased him ____________(无情地)when they found the poem.

3.Hearing the reply, he smiled ____________(满意地).

4."I'm sorry," she said, smiling ____________(微弱地).

5.He ____________(匆忙地)went to school, running all the way.

6.She was staring ____________(闷闷不乐地)into the fire.

7.He signed his name ____________(犹豫不决地).

8.We sat waiting ____________(不耐烦地)for the film to start.

9.He closed his eyes ____________(疲倦地).

10.“I will give up smoking,” he said ____________(坚定地).

11.She smiled at him ____________(深情地).

12.He looked at his friend's new car ____________(羡慕地).

13.She waited ____________(焦急地)by the phone.

14.She left the gambling table ____________(失望地).

15.His father died ____________(意外地).

16.The two friends shook hands ____________(有力地).

17.____________(高兴地), she accepted the invitation.

18.  “What has happened?” He asked ____________(困惑地).

19. `I wonder what to do,' she said ____________(担忧地).

20. She smiled at him _________.(天真地)


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