2025年普通高校招生考试适应性测试英语大作文

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2025年普通高校招生考试适应性测试英语大作文

I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.


I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.


It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers — very big, tough-looking bikers.


I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men — all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club — standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater? Had I misread the date of the event?


A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.


Paragraph 1: I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.

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Paragraph 2: When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.

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考卷中并没有任何下划线词汇。我们刻意标出这些词汇是想展现续写和原文概念的互动。还不太明白这样做的道理的朋友请回顾:《为什么高考英语浙江卷读后续写值得我们重点关注?》


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故事中文梗概

作者“我”是一名女性。“我”在费城参加一次会议时,看到一则广告,介绍附近一座剧院正在放映关于动物收容(animal shelters)的纪录片,旨在为流浪狗筹款(fundraising)。由于自己喜爱动物,“我”决定参加这个募捐活动,但因为担心晚上独自走在街上不安全,最初打算放弃。然而,回到酒店房间后,感到无聊且情绪低落,最终决定冒险前往。尽管剧院离酒店只有五个街区,且周围环境看似并不危险,但当“我”走到剧院时,发现门前聚集了一群身形高大、看起来很凶的摩托骑士(bikers),“我”感到十分不安。“我”一度考虑是否应该立即返回酒店,但最终决定进入剧院。。。


主要人物: 作者“我”、bikers (摩托车骑士们)

叙事视角: 第一人称视角

故事主题:1.人与动物 2. 认知固化 3. 消除偏见


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续写思路建议

第一段,考生可以主要写作者“我”进入剧院后看到里面聚集了更多的摩托车骑士后的心理活动(比如:不安、害怕)。同时可以描述骑士们之间的一些互动(语言、动作)。为了和第二段出题人给出的开头句合理衔接(不至于显得太突然),第一段的末尾可以提到“我”的心理环境和刚进入剧院时候有了变化(逐步感到这些摩托车骑士其实很友善)。


第二段,可以主要写电影开始后的情况,比如:记录片的大致内容(当然必须和救助动物有关)。一种可行的思路是:记录片里提到了参与动物救助的主要一群人就是在场的这些骑士们。通过观看该影片,“我”对摩托车群体的固有认知逐步改变。末尾,如果能稍微升华一下,把故事主题往“消除偏见”上靠一靠就很好了。


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知诸英语Nicole老师写作示范

Paragraph 1: I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. They occupied most of the seats, their leather jackets and tattoos making them look even more intimidating.(描写骑士们的穿着打扮,凸显群体属性)I quickly found a spot near the back, hoping to blend into the shadows.(合理的内容设置:“我”害怕这群人所以尽量离他们远一点)However, as I settled in, I noticed their lively conversations weren’t what I had expected.(转折就此开始)They were discussing dog rescues and fundraising events, sharing heartfelt stories about the animals they had helped. One biker spoke about nursing a sick puppy back to health, while another mentioned organizing charity rides to support local shelters.高度复现原文词汇和概念)My fear started to fade, replaced by curiosity and a sense of admiration.(合理的情绪变化:害怕和不安逐步转变为好奇和欣赏)(98 words) 


Paragraph 2: When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. Early in the documentary, a segment introduced their organization, describing them as a group united by a shared passion. They weren’t just motorcycle enthusiasts; they shared a love for animals.(理的内容创设:通过影片内容得知他们是一伙热衷救助动物事业的骑士)The footage showed them rescuing injured dogs, delivering supplies to shelters, and organizing events to raise awareness about animal welfare. Shelter staff praised their dedication, highlighting how their support had transformed the lives of countless animals.(具体提及骑士们的所作所为,为彻底消除“我”的偏见做足铺垫)As the audience applauded, I felt deep respect. Walking back to my hotel under the quiet night sky, I reflected on how appearances can be deceiving and kindness often comes from unexpected places.(文末主题升华句起到了提炼故事主题“认知固化和偏见消除”的作用)(98 words)



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词汇和表达推荐

  1. tattoo (n. 纹身)

  2. intimidating (adj. 令人畏惧的,威吓的)

  3. charity ride (noun phrase 慈善骑行)

  4. segment (n. 部分,片段)

  5. animal welfare (noun phrase 动物福利)

  6. applaud (v. 鼓掌,赞扬)

  7. deceiving (adj. 欺骗性的,具有误导性的)


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