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在23年里，Elon老师共写了53场雅思考试的解析，基本覆盖了每一次考试的解析，其中有20次命中了我们的预测题目或者写作营的素材，小作文命中22次！
这是我们第249期雅思写作解析
1123大陆A类考情
小作文：动静结合的柱图（难度不大）
8分参考范文：
The bar chart illustrates the cost per kilogram of clothing imported by the European Union (EU) from six different countries in 1993 and 2003. Overall, Argentina commanded the highest price for clothing exports in both years, while Bangladesh consistently received the lowest. Over the decade, noticeable changes occurred in the prices paid to several countries, with significant increases for China and India.
In 1993, the EU paid approximately 28 pounds per kilogram to Argentina, which was the highest among the six nations. By 2003, this price slightly declined to just over 25 pounds, yet Argentina remained the top recipient of premium prices. Brazil, the second highest in both years, maintained its price level at around 23 pounds per kilogram, demonstrating remarkable stability.
Japan, on the other hand, experienced a moderate decline in its clothing export price, dropping from 15 pounds in 1993 to about 13 pounds in 2003. In contrast, China witnessed a substantial increase, with its price rising from 10 pounds to roughly 17 pounds over the same period. This sharp growth highlights China's increasing value in the clothing export market.
Similarly, India’s prices for garments doubled from 7 pounds per kilogram in 1993 to 14 pounds in 2003, marking one of the most significant price surges. Although Bangladesh remained at the bottom of the list, the price paid for its exports rose from a mere 3 pounds in 1993 to 6 pounds in 2003, indicating some improvement in the perceived value of its products.
In summary, while Argentina and Brazil consistently received the highest prices for their clothing exports, countries like China and India saw remarkable growth in their export values, reflecting their increasing competitiveness in the global market. Bangladesh, although still the lowest earner, also experienced some positive progress.
大作文：Some people believe that studing at university or college is the best rout to have a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
提示：
1. 这个题目难度不大，考核教育类，继续上学VS尽早找工作；
2. 题目里面有best这个绝对词，需要在说明白教育好处后，先怼下；
中文提纲：
1. 开头
2. 的确大学教育能够让学生学到很强的专业知识，特别是针对一些医学+法律的学生+解释+例子+ 但这不是best，毕竟大学不便宜，而且不是所有的学生，所有的专业都需要文凭+例子；
3.当然，首先，直接工作的好处就是能够积累大量的经验+解释+例子。+此外，人们没上大学也可以省去学生不少时间和费用，让他们更加专注于社会层面工作的积累
4. 总而言之，有好有坏，具体需要结合个人的情况
8分参考范文：
When deciding between pursuing higher education or joining the workforce immediately after school, people often consider the benefits of academic qualifications versus gaining early practical experience. While both approaches have advantages, the choice ultimately depends on career aspirations and personal goals.
One significant benefit of attending university is the acquisition of specialised knowledge and skills that are essential for certain professions. 解释Fields like medicine, law, or engineering require formal training and certification, which only universities or colleges can provide. 例子For instance, becoming a doctor necessitates years of rigorous academic study and practical internships, making higher education indispensable for such careers. （反驳best）However, university education is not always the best path, as it can be time-consuming and expensive, and many graduates face challenges securing jobs in their fields due to market saturation.
On the other hand, starting work directly after school allows individuals to gain hands-on experience and become financially independent earlier. This route is especially beneficial for those entering trades like carpentry or plumbing, where skills are primarily acquired through on-the-job training or apprenticeships. For example, many skilled tradespeople build successful careers without formal qualifications by mastering their craft over time. Additionally, by skipping university, individuals can avoid student debt and focus on practical skills, which can lead to faster career advancement in fields that value experience over degrees.
In conclusion, while entering the workforce early offers advantages such as financial independence and practical expertise, higher education provides broader career options and long-term benefits. In my opinion, pursuing a degree is more beneficial for those aiming for competitive or specialised roles. Ultimately, the decision should align with one’s career ambitions and the demands of their chosen field.
11月30日大陆区雅思大小作文预测如下：
大作文:社会-媒体-教育
小作文：饼图-表格-流程地图
以下的文章大家至少要考前写个提纲！
1.Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or allow them to do whatever they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be the consequences for these children when they grow up?（教育）
2.More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?（社会）
3.Some people believe that in order to reduce crimes, prisoners should be given longer prison sentences while some people think there are other alternative ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.（犯罪）
4.In recent years, “responsible tourists” have paid attention to preserving both culture and environment of the places they visit. However, some people say that it is impossible to be a “responsible tourist”. To what extent do you agree or disagree? （旅游）
5.News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative?（媒体）
6.Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take actions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.（环境）
7.Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?（教育）
8.In the past, teachers were the main source of information, but today students have a wide source of information, so teachers are no longer important in the modern education. Do you agree or disagree?（教育）
9.Some people think sports games are important for society, while others believe they should be taken as leisure activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 社会
10.Some people think the increasing use of technology in the workplace is good for young people's prospects of gaining a job and harder for old people. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 科技
11.Some people think that with the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, people lose the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 科技
12.Some people think governments should spend money on measures to save languages with few speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 社会语言
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