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928大陆A类考情
小作文：The table below gives information about populations in Australia and Malaysia from 1980 to 2002.
大作文：Historical objects and artefacts should be brought back to their country of origin. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
提示：
1. 这个是一个全新的题目，之前大陆区还没有考过，这个题目当然可能咱们中国同学比较有感受呀，但是正儿八经写起来是有点难度的！
2. 这个题目里面有较多的抽象词，需要同学们去积累学习。
3. 这里涉及的是这些文物从博物馆归还到其原来的国家，所以咱们要去聊博物馆的价值！
中文提纲：
1. 开头
2. 归还文物有两个原因。首先，这是为了正义。这是因为，许多文物博物馆里的文物是通过强制、殖民掠夺或盗窃获得，在一些特殊的时代。我们会认为归还文物是纠正历史不公的重要步骤。+例子（希腊文物的例子）；此外，文物所有国对于文物有所有权。这是因为，国家有权管理和保护自己的文化遗产。很多文物遗失迫于无奈，那么文物归还有助于增强国家的身份认同和自主权。例子，埃及文物的回归。
3.当然现在博物馆也有其特有的价值来保护原先的这些文物。这是因为有一些相对落后的国家可能在文物保护方面还是有些欠缺，或者这些文物可能有进一步受损的可能。原先博物馆的技术可以通过虚拟博物馆和合作研究等方式保留全球可访问性。比如：卢浮宫可以在数字存档和学术合作中发挥作用。
4. 总结，文物需要归还。
9分参考范文：
The debate surrounding the repatriation of historical artifacts is emblematic of the broader discourse on cultural ownership, ethics, and the role of institutions in a globalized world. I emphatically agree that, in principle, historical objects should be returned to their countries of origin. This stance is grounded in the principles of justice, self-determination, and the acknowledgment of the intrinsic value of cultural heritage.关于历史文物归还的争论，象征着围绕文化所有权、伦理以及在全球化背景下机构作用的广泛讨论。我坚决认为，原则上，历史文物应该归还至其原产国。这个立场基于正义、自主权以及对文化遗产内在价值的承认。
At the heart of the argument for repatriation lies the pursuit of justice. Many historical artifacts were acquired through coercion, colonization, or outright theft during periods of imperial expansion. Returning these items is not merely a symbolic gesture but an essential step toward rectifying historical injustices. The Elgin Marbles, for instance, stand as a stark reminder of the plunder of cultural treasures, and their return to Greece in 2021 was a triumph for justice and national pride.支持归还文物的核心理由是追求正义。许多历史文物是通过强制、殖民化或帝国扩张时期的公然掠夺获得的。归还这些物品不仅仅是象征性的举动，更是纠正历史不公的重要一步。例如，埃尔金大理石雕像就是文化瑰宝被掠夺的显著例子，其在2021年归还希腊是正义与民族自豪感的胜利。
Moreover, the principle of self-determination is paramount. Nations have the right to control and preserve their cultural heritage, free from external influence. Repatriation empowers nations to reclaim their history, fostering a sense of identity and agency. The return of the Rosetta Stone to Egypt in 1802 was a pioneering act that set the precedent for acknowledging the autonomy of nations in managing their cultural legacies.此外，自主权原则至关重要。国家有权控制并保护其文化遗产，不受外界干扰。文物归还使国家能够重拾自己的历史，增强身份认同感和自主权。1802年，罗塞塔石碑归还埃及，这一先驱性的举动为承认各国在管理其文化遗产方面的自主权开创了先例。
While acknowledging the importance of institutions as custodians of global heritage, their role should be one of facilitation rather than possession. Advanced technologies, such as virtual museums and collaborative research initiatives, can ensure that the global community retains access to these artifacts. The Louvre, for example, can play a pivotal role in digital archiving and facilitating scholarly collaboration while allowing artifacts to be physically returned to their countries of origin.虽然承认机构作为全球遗产保护者的重要性，但它们的作用应当是促进而非占有。先进技术，如虚拟博物馆和合作研究项目，可以确保全球社会仍然能够接触这些文物。例如，卢浮宫可以在数字化存档和促进学术合作方面发挥关键作用，同时允许文物被归还至其原产国。
In conclusion, the repatriation of historical artifacts aligns with principles of justice, self-determination, and cultural autonomy. A balanced approach involves leveraging technological advancements to maintain global accessibility while honoring the rightful ownership and stewardship of nations over their cultural treasures.
总之，归还历史文物符合正义、自主权和文化自主的原则。一种平衡的方式是利用技术进步来保持全球可访问性，同时尊重各国对其文化瑰宝的合法所有权和管理权。
10月12日大陆区雅思大小作文预测如下：
大作文:社会-媒体-教育
小作文：饼图-流程地图-表格
以下的文章大家至少要考前写个提纲！
1.Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or allow them to do whatever they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be the consequences for these children when they grow up?（教育）
2.More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?（社会）
3.Some people believe that in order to reduce crimes, prisoners should be given longer prison sentences while some people think there are other alternative ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.（犯罪）
4.In recent years, “responsible tourists” have paid attention to preserving both culture and environment of the places they visit. However, some people say that it is impossible to be a “responsible tourist”. To what extent do you agree or disagree? （旅游）
5.Some people think that the best way to improve road transport safety is to let the driver test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?（社会）
6.News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative?（媒体）
7.Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take actions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.（环境）
8.Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?（教育）
9.In the past, teachers were the main source of information, but today students have a wide source of information, so teachers are no longer important in the modern education. Do you agree or disagree?（教育）
10.Some people think sports games are important for society, while others believe they should be taken as leisure activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 社会
11.Some people think the increasing use of technology in the workplace is good for young people's prospects of gaining a job and harder for old people. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 科技
12.Some people think that with the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, people lose the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 科技
13.Some people think governments should spend money on measures to save languages with few speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 社会语言
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