新手必看(2)-雅思写作7.5分开头段写作

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在雅思写作的开篇部分,如何迅速引出话题并给出明确的观点,往往决定了你的整体印象分。为了帮助大家应对这个难题,我为你们提供几个开头模版,专门针对意见类的题目,保证让你的作文开篇就充满亮点。

第一句:引导话题

  1. In contemporary discourse, the pivotal issue of... remains a perennial subject of scrutiny.优点: 词汇如“discourse”与“perennial”显得更正式,适合学术场合。

  2. As society continues to progress, the prominence of... has grown exponentially.优点: 使用了“exponentially”来强调增长的速度,适用于快速发展的话题。

  3. In an increasingly interconnected world, the relevance of... is becoming ever more pronounced.优点: 强调全球化背景,“interconnected world”增加了时代感。

  4. The discourse surrounding... has garnered significant attention in recent years, reflecting its ongoing importance.优点: “garnered significant attention”显得更书面化。


第二句:提出观点

支持观点:

  1. I am unequivocally in favour of the notion that...

  2. I wholeheartedly subscribe to the belief that...

  3. I firmly contend that... 

  4. I wholeheartedly endorse the view that...


反对观点:

  1. It would be erroneous to suggest that...

  2. To assert that... would be both reductive and misinformed.

  3. It would be erroneous to claim that...

  4. It is misguided to suggest that...


例句:

  • In an increasingly interconnected world, the relevance of sustainable development is becoming ever more pronounced. I wholeheartedly subscribe to the belief that immediate action is required to safeguard our environment for future generations.


  • The discourse surrounding artificial intelligence has garnered significant attention in recent years, reflecting its ongoing importance. However, it would be erroneous to suggest that AI will single-handedly solve all societal issues, as it introduces new ethical challenges.


这些高级词汇不仅提升了句子的正式性,还能帮助你在雅思写作中取得更好的分数。


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