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这是我们第247期雅思写作解析
1017大陆A类考情
小作文：流程图 The diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products.
提示：这个流程图其实是2个阶段，上面说的是这个菠萝的生长过程；而下面的图则讲的是菠萝的用途和走向；简而言之就是，让你写菠萝是怎么来的以及菠萝是怎么没的。
The stages involved in the growth and production of pineapples for various applications are depicted in the diagram.
As can be seen in the image, depending on their size and intended usage, harvested pineapples will go through several treatments.
To begin with, the perfect growing conditions for pineapple plants are plenty of sunlight and a warm temperature (28 to 30 degrees Celsius). The plants are separated from one another by 26 cm. When the pineapples are roughly seven months old, chemicals are added to the crop.（这里其实可以再加一个目的，去写为什么要加这个肥料） The fruits are deemed ripe for harvesting after an additional five months, at which point they should be 30 cm and 2 kg in height and weight, respectively.
In terms of the manufacturing procedure, pineapples of various sizes that have been picked are cleaned before sorting. Small and medium-sized ones will then have their outer skin peeled off and their crowns removed. The former are then crushed into smaller bits and canned, while the latter are turned into pineapple juice using an extractor. On the other hand, bigger pineapples are put in cartons for shipping after being cleaned and waxed to maintain their freshness.
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大作文：Many students find it harder to study when they are at university or college than when they were at school. Why is this? What can be done to solve the problem? （命中教育类话题）
提示：
1. 这个题目考核的是报告类的话题，现象是学生们觉得去了大学后比高中以及之前难学，为什么以及怎么解决。
2. 这个题目里面很重要的是定义什么是难，比如科目更难？科目更多？方法不一样等。这个可以是同学们自己定义，你要写的2个原因也可以是这里的不同定义，但是你自己要解释好哦。
3. 当然还有一点就是学生到了大学后，需要自理生活，甚至打工，所以他们在学习上的时间也会减少。
中文提纲：
1. 开头
2. 有两个原因；原因1: 学生在之前的学校里没有养成一系列的习惯，比如批判性思维、独立研究和时间管理技能，导致他们在大学无法适应。+例子+ 原因2:高中阶段过于依赖电子产品让他们丧失了部分自我探索答案的机会。这是因为电子设备能够快速给到他们全面的详尽的答案，但是大学考核可能不一样，因此部分学生会无能为力。+例子
3. 提出对应的解决办法1+2
4.总结
8分参考范文：
Many students encounter greater challenges in their studies at university or college compared to their experiences in school. This phenomenon can be attributed to several factors, including increased academic demands and the role of technology, particularly artificial intelligence (AI), in shaping their learning environments.许多学生在大学或学院学习时遇到的挑战比在学校时更大。这种现象可以归因于多个因素，包括学术要求的增加和科技，特别是人工智能（AI）在塑造学习环境中的作用。
Firstly, the transition from school to higher education often involves a substantial leap in academic rigor. University courses tend to require a higher level of critical thinking, independent research, and time management skills. Students must adapt to a more self-directed approach to learning, which can be daunting for those accustomed to a structured school environment. Additionally, the sheer volume of information and the expectation for students to synthesize and apply knowledge rather than merely regurgitating facts can contribute to feelings of overwhelm.首先，从学校到高等教育的过渡通常涉及学术严格性的显著提升。大学课程往往要求更高水平的批判性思维、独立研究和时间管理技能。学生们必须适应更加自主的学习方式，这对那些习惯于结构化学校环境的学生来说可能会感到令人畏惧。此外，信息量庞大以及期望学生综合应用知识而不仅仅是机械记忆事实，都会导致他们感到不知所措。
Moreover, while AI has the potential to enhance learning, it can also complicate the educational landscape. Many students rely on AI tools for quick answers or assistance with assignments, which may hinder their ability to develop essential problem-solving skills and deep understanding of the subject matter. The ease of access to information can lead to a superficial grasp of concepts, making it harder for students to engage in meaningful learning.此外，尽管人工智能有潜力增强学习效果，但它也可能使教育环境变得更加复杂。许多学生依赖人工智能工具获取快速答案或协助完成作业，这可能妨碍他们发展必要的问题解决技能和对学科内容的深刻理解。信息的易得性可能导致对概念的肤浅理解，使学生更难以参与有意义的学习。
To address these challenges, universities should implement comprehensive support systems for students. This could include workshops on effective study strategies, time management, and critical thinking skills. Additionally, integrating AI as a complementary tool rather than a crutch can encourage students to harness technology to augment their learning rather than substitute it. Faculty members can also play a crucial role by fostering an environment that promotes active engagement and encourages students to ask questions and seek deeper insights.为了解决这些挑战，大学应实施全面的学生支持系统。这可以包括有效学习策略、时间管理和批判性思维技能的研讨会。此外，将人工智能作为补充工具而非依赖工具，可以鼓励学生利用科技来增强学习，而不是替代学习。教职员工也可以发挥重要作用，通过营造一个促进积极参与的环境，鼓励学生提出问题，寻求更深入的见解。In conclusion, while the transition to higher education poses significant challenges for students, understanding the underlying factors and implementing effective support mechanisms can greatly enhance their academic experience.总之，虽然过渡到高等教育给学生带来了重大挑战，但理解这些潜在因素并实施有效的支持机制可以大大提升他们的学术体验。
10月26日大陆区雅思大小作文预测如下：
大作文:社会-媒体-教育
小作文：饼图-流程地图-表格
以下的文章大家至少要考前写个提纲！
1.Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or allow them to do whatever they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be the consequences for these children when they grow up?（教育）
2.More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?（社会）
3.Some people believe that in order to reduce crimes, prisoners should be given longer prison sentences while some people think there are other alternative ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.（犯罪）
4.In recent years, “responsible tourists” have paid attention to preserving both culture and environment of the places they visit. However, some people say that it is impossible to be a “responsible tourist”. To what extent do you agree or disagree? （旅游）
6.News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative?（媒体）
7.Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take actions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.（环境）
8.Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?（教育）
9.In the past, teachers were the main source of information, but today students have a wide source of information, so teachers are no longer important in the modern education. Do you agree or disagree?（教育）
10.Some people think sports games are important for society, while others believe they should be taken as leisure activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 社会
11.Some people think the increasing use of technology in the workplace is good for young people's prospects of gaining a job and harder for old people. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 科技
12.Some people think that with the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, people lose the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 科技
13.Some people think governments should spend money on measures to save languages with few speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 社会语言
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