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在23年里，Elon老师共写了53场雅思考试的解析，基本覆盖了每一次考试的解析，其中有20次命中了我们的预测题目或者写作营的素材，小作文命中22次！
这是我们第251期雅思写作解析
1207大陆A类考情
小作文：静态柱图（难度大）The table below shows employment patterns for males and females in New Zealand in 1993 and 2003.
解析：
1.这个题目估计提前预定了今年雅思最难的小作文，整体题目是一个动静结合的题目，就是有时间的变化，但是不多，只有2个年份，所以动态的趋势变化要写，但是能写的东西不多，静态的比较也得写；
2. 所以我们在第二段概述段里可以写以下几个点：1. 这三类型员工的数据里面，整体较大的是哪些？比如这里的数据应该是从左往右，数据一次变小；但是这个题目和其他题目有一个反差，就是这里的数据越大，越不是好事情，也就是说 skilled workers的数据都大，那么其实说明雇佣这类员工的难度最大。
3. 与此同时，同学们也需要关注03到04年的数据变化，可以发现skilled workers 整体数据都上升，除了commerce；unskilled workers整体上升，除了commerce；而managerial worker 的数据整体都是下降。在后面的主体段里面只需要把这些细节展开就可以了；
4. 需要注意的是，这里的数据比较多，所以需要涉及各类主语+动词+副词的变化。
8分参考范文：
The table compares the percentage of difficulties employers faced in four New Zealand sectors (Manufacturing, Building, Commerce, and Services) when trying to recruit three categories of workers—skilled, unskilled, and technical/managerial—in 2003 and 2004.
Overall, the data indicate that challenges in finding skilled workers generally increased or remained high across most sectors, while difficulties in recruiting unskilled staff fluctuated, and problems locating technical and managerial employees declined in every case.
In terms of skilled labor, Manufacturing saw the highest rise, from 45% in 2003 to 51% in 2004, and the Services sector also experienced a notable increase, from 41% to 45%. While the Building industry’s figure rose modestly (42% to 45%), Commerce was the only exception, dropping from 47% to 41%.
With regard to unskilled positions, Manufacturing and Building both recorded small increases of 2 percentage points each, reaching 28% and 23% respectively. By contrast, Commerce witnessed a decrease from 22% to 19%, whereas Services saw a significant jump, from 20% up to 29%.
Finally, difficulties in finding technical and managerial staff declined across all sectors, with Commerce falling to 0% in 2004, while Manufacturing, Building, and Services recorded decreases ranging from 2 to 4 percentage points.
大作文：One long-distance flight consumes fuel which a car uses in several years’ time, but they cause the same amount of pollution.So some people think that we should discourage non-essential flights, such as tourist travel, rather than to limit the use of cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree? （难度大）
提示：
1. 这个题感觉是属于一个非常好的检测考生审题能力的题目；首先，本题属于是否同意类题目，接下来的关键就是确定题中的观点，一般我们就去找有没有some people think 这种表达，如上面蓝色部分所示，所以同学们就只需要看so 后面的内容就可以了；这里要注意的是，如果本题没有蓝色部分的some people think that，那么文中的观点就是整个题目所有的文字了。
2. 也正是基于这个点，我们就不需要论证so前后的因果关系是否要论证。
3. 接下来要注意的是题目中的比较结构，绿色部分的rather than，只要出现类似的结构，如more than/ better than 之类的结构，那么同学们就得去cover 比较结构里的两者，也就是说 discourage non-essential flights 和limit the use of cars 都要提及，缺一不可。
4.最后还有一个隐藏的审题点，题目里面提出的这两个方法discourage non-essential flights 和limit the use of cars 的目的是什么呢？是为了保护环境？是为了减少燃料使用？还是其他？只能写上述的否一个层面呢？还是都可以呢？其实这个题目so之前的内容无疑介绍了下这个题目的愿景，其实就是没有限定，那么！同学们就可以写保护环境+减少燃料使用+甚至non-essential flights 在经济层面的好处，没有限制；
8分参考范文：
12月14日大陆区雅思大小作文预测如下：
大作文:社会-教育-政府
小作文：饼图-线图-流程地图
以下的文章大家至少要考前写个提纲！
1.Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or allow them to do whatever they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be the consequences for these children when they grow up?（教育）
2.More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?（社会）
3.Some people believe that in order to reduce crimes, prisoners should be given longer prison sentences while some people think there are other alternative ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.（犯罪）
4.In recent years, “responsible tourists” have paid attention to preserving both culture and environment of the places they visit. However, some people say that it is impossible to be a “responsible tourist”. To what extent do you agree or disagree? （旅游）
6.Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take actions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.（环境）
7.Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?（教育）
8.In the past, teachers were the main source of information, but today students have a wide source of information, so teachers are no longer important in the modern education. Do you agree or disagree?（教育）
9.Some people think sports games are important for society, while others believe they should be taken as leisure activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 社会
10.Some people think the increasing use of technology in the workplace is good for young people's prospects of gaining a job and harder for old people. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 科技
11.Some people think that with the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, people lose the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 科技
12.Some people think governments should spend money on measures to save languages with few speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 社会语言
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