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这是我们第243期雅思写作解析
824大陆A类考情
小作文:The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.
黑色柱子(1990)+横线柱子(2010)
7.5+参考范文:
The bar graph shows how many trips children between the ages of 5 and 12 took in a particular nation between 1990 and 2010. These students used five different means of transportation—riding in a car, biking, walking, using the bus, and just taking the bus—to go from school to home.
Among the five options, walking was the preferred means of transportation. However, between 1990 and 2010, children ranked cars as their least preferred means of transportation. By 2010, the children's most and least preferred modes of transportation for getting to and from school were riding in a car and cycling, respectively.
Walking was the most popular travelling method for children in 1990, occupying more than 12 million trips to and from school. In contrast, cycling and bus made about 6 million and 7 million annual trips, respectively. On the other hand, the number of trips made by the combination of walking and bus, and by car, were the least, ranging from just over 4 million to 6 million trips.
In 2010, the most preferred medium of transportation for children was car, with 11 million trips. Walking followed closely behind with 6 million travels each year. Moreover, trips made by walking and bus, and bus alone were also popular, with 3 million and about 5 million trips, respectively, in that year. In addition, with only 2 million trips made annually, cycling was the least used transportation method among the children in 2010.
大作文:When deciding to spend taxes, governments should prioritize health care, while some people think there are other important aspects using money by taxpayers. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
提示:
1. 有同学和我说这个题目是关于收税,他去写了怎么收税,为什么收税,那肯定错了!
2. 这个题目是属于典型的政府职能的题目,政府到底要不要花钱在医疗上+还是说在其他重要的项目上,当然都可以呀,教育+艺术+环境+国防啥的都可以写;
3. 至于内容素材,可以直接用elon老师素材套用起来,比如下面投钱到教育和医疗这个素材
以及下面的投钱到基础建设和环境保护的素材
中文提纲:
1. 开头
2. 的确投钱到医疗上有用:1. 取之于民用之于民+解释+why。2. 照顾弱势群体+解释+why
3. 投钱到教育的价值+why + 投钱到环境的价值 +why
4.总结:都很重要,多者结合疗效好
7.5+参考范文:
Governments face the challenging task of allocating tax revenue to various sectors, with health care often cited as a top priority. However, some argue that other areas, such as education, infrastructure, and defense, are equally important. This essay will explore both perspectives and offer an opinion on the issue.
Proponents of prioritizing health care argue that it is a fundamental human right and a critical component of societal well-being. Investing in health care ensures that citizens have access to necessary medical services, which can lead to a healthier, more productive population. For example, countries like the United Kingdom, with its National Health Service (NHS), demonstrate how prioritizing health care can lead to improved public health outcomes. Additionally, a well-funded health care system can reduce the burden on emergency services and prevent the spread of diseases, thereby safeguarding public health and reducing long-term costs.
On the other hand, opponents contend that other sectors, such as education and infrastructure, are equally deserving of government attention and resources. Education, for instance, plays a crucial role in shaping the future workforce and fostering innovation. Without a robust education system, a country may struggle to compete globally, regardless of the quality of its health care system. Similarly, infrastructure development is essential for economic growth, as it facilitates trade, reduces transportation costs, and attracts foreign investment. Countries like South Korea have successfully balanced spending on education and infrastructure alongside health care, contributing to their rapid economic development.
In my opinion, while health care should be a priority, it should not overshadow other critical areas. A balanced approach, where health care, education, and infrastructure receive adequate funding, is essential for holistic development. Governments should consider the long-term benefits of investing in a variety of sectors to create a well-rounded, prosperous society. Ultimately, the allocation of tax revenue should be based on a comprehensive assessment of a nation's needs, ensuring that no critical area is neglected.
8月31日大陆区雅思大小作文预测如下:
大作文:社会-媒体-教育
小作文:饼图-流程地图-表格
以下的文章大家至少要考前写个提纲!
1.Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or allow them to do whatever they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be the consequences for these children when they grow up?(教育)
2.More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?(社会)
3.Some people believe that in order to reduce crimes, prisoners should be given longer prison sentences while some people think there are other alternative ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.(犯罪)
4.In recent years, “responsible tourists” have paid attention to preserving both culture and environment of the places they visit. However, some people say that it is impossible to be a “responsible tourist”. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (旅游)
5.Some people think that the best way to improve road transport safety is to let the driver test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(社会)
6.News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative?(媒体)
7.Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take actions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.(环境)
8.Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?(教育)
9.In the past, teachers were the main source of information, but today students have a wide source of information, so teachers are no longer important in the modern education. Do you agree or disagree?(教育)
10.Some people think sports games are important for society, while others believe they should be taken as leisure activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 社会
11.Some people think the increasing use of technology in the workplace is good for young people's prospects of gaining a job and harder for old people. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 科技
12.Nowadays there are many television advertisements aimed at children. What effects do they have on children? Should TV advertising be controlled? 媒体
13.Some people think that with the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, people lose the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 科技
14.Some people think governments should spend money on measures to save languages with few speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 社会语言
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