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大作文：Some people think that there could be more benefits to society if more people study business than history. To what extent do you agree or disagree？（重复大陆22/12/17老题）
提示：
1. 确定题目类型和观点
本题属于是否同意类题目，需要针对题目中提出的观点展开论述。题目观点认为：“更多人学习商业比历史会给社会带来更多的好处。”
考生可以选择：
-完全同意：认为商业的实际应用和经济贡献确实比历史更有益。
-完全不同意：认为历史的教育价值和社会意义不可替代。
-部分同意：承认商业对社会的重要性，但历史在文化、教育等方面的价值也不可忽视。
2. 题目关键词拆解与核心思路
Business（商业）：涉及商业管理 business management 、市场营销markting 、创业innovation等实际技能领域。+对经济增长economic growth、就业employment和技术创新technological innovation具有推动作用。
History（历史）：研究人类过去的行为human behavior、文化和事件。+对塑造社会reshape social values价值观、国家认同country identity 和文化传承具有重要意义。
Benefits to society（对社会的益处）：包括经济、教育、文化、科技和社会稳定等多个维度。
审题关键点：
是否同意商业对社会的贡献更大：需要论述商业领域对经济和就业的促进作用。
是否忽视历史的价值：需要分析历史学科对文化传承和社会发展的重要性。
两者是否可以平衡：可以提出综合观点，探讨两者的不同作用,这个比较好写
3. 隐藏审题点与注意事项
范围限定：
题目讨论的是商业和历史对社会的益处，而非个人职业选择的优劣,不要去写什么学了历史之后个人变得如何有竞争力，这点一定要注意！
避免过多涉及其他学科（如科学、艺术等）。
论述重点：
需要具体论述商业如何带来经济和社会利益。
也需要论证历史对社会文化和价值观的重要影响。
避免极端化：
可以提出综合观点，例如“商业和历史各自有不同的社会作用，学习人数不应过于偏向单一学科。
8分参考范文：
It is often argued that society would gain more advantages if individuals focused on studying business rather than history. While I acknowledge the critical role that business plays in driving economic growth, I firmly believe that history remains indispensable for fostering a well-rounded and sustainable society.
One compelling reason why business studies are deemed beneficial is their direct contribution to economic progress. Business equips individuals with practical skills in entrepreneurship, finance, and management, enabling them to start ventures, create jobs, and solve pressing economic challenges. For instance, prominent entrepreneurs like Jack Ma used their business acumen to establish globally influential companies that have transformed industries and boosted local economies. This demonstrates how business knowledge can generate tangible benefits for society by fostering innovation and improving livelihoods.
However, history serves an equally important purpose by helping societies learn from the past. Historical study promotes cultural understanding and enables people to critically assess past decisions to avoid repeating mistakes. For example, understanding the causes and consequences of conflicts like World War II has shaped global institutions, such as the United Nations, that aim to prevent future wars. By preserving cultural heritage and fostering a deeper appreciation of human achievements, history provides a moral compass that complements the practical applications of business.
Furthermore, the integration of both fields is vital for societal progress. Business leaders benefit from historical insights when navigating ethical dilemmas or expanding into international markets. Similarly, historians can collaborate with businesses to promote heritage tourism, combining economic development with cultural preservation. This synergy underscores the importance of striking a balance between the two disciplines. 最后还是两者结合疗效好呀！
In conclusion, while the practical contributions of business to economic growth are undeniable, the societal value of history in shaping ethical decision-making and cultural identity cannot be overlooked. A balanced emphasis on both fields is essential for a prosperous and enlightened society.
中文翻译：
有人认为，社会若更注重商业学习会更有益。我承认商业在推动经济增长方面的关键作用，但我坚信，历史对于促进全面而可持续发展的社会同样不可或缺。
首先，学习商业被认为有益的一个重要原因是它能直接促进经济发展。商业教育赋予个人创业、财务管理和运营管理的实践技能，使他们能够创办企业、创造就业机会并解决经济难题。例如，像马云这样的知名企业家利用商业头脑建立了具有全球影响力的公司，改变了行业并促进了地方经济发展。这表明，商业知识可以通过推动创新和改善生活水平为社会带来切实的好处。
然而，历史也同样重要，因为它帮助社会从过去汲取教训。历史研究促进文化理解，使人们能够批判性地评估过去的决策，从而避免重复错误。例如，理解第二次世界大战的起因和后果促成了联合国等全球机构的建立，其宗旨是预防未来的战争。通过保存文化遗产并增强对人类成就的欣赏，历史为社会提供了道德指南，与商业的实践应用形成互补。
此外，两个领域的结合对社会进步至关重要。商业领袖在处理道德困境或开拓国际市场时，可以从历史中汲取智慧。同样，历史学者也可以与企业合作，推广文化旅游，将经济发展与文化保护相结合。这种协同效应强调了在这两者之间取得平衡的重要性。
总之，尽管商业对经济增长的实际贡献不可否认，但历史在塑造伦理决策和文化认同方面的社会价值也不容忽视。在这两个领域之间保持平衡，对构建繁荣而具有启迪意义的社会至关重要。
2月8日大陆区雅思大小作文预测如下：
大作文:社会-教育-政府
小作文：饼图-线图-流程地图
以下的文章大家至少要考前写个提纲！
1.Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or allow them to do whatever they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be the consequences for these children when they grow up?（教育）
2.More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?（社会）
3.Some people believe that in order to reduce crimes, prisoners should be given longer prison sentences while some people think there are other alternative ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.（犯罪）
4.In recent years, “responsible tourists” have paid attention to preserving both culture and environment of the places they visit. However, some people say that it is impossible to be a “responsible tourist”. To what extent do you agree or disagree? （旅游）
6.Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take actions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.（环境）
7.Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?（教育）
8.In the past, teachers were the main source of information, but today students have a wide source of information, so teachers are no longer important in the modern education. Do you agree or disagree?（教育）
9.Some people think sports games are important for society, while others believe they should be taken as leisure activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 社会
10.Some people think the increasing use of technology in the workplace is good for young people's prospects of gaining a job and harder for old people. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 科技
11.Some people think that with the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, people lose the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 科技
12.Some people think governments should spend money on measures to save languages with few speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 社会语言
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