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1026大陆A类考情
小作文：线图 The graph below gives information about computer possession by households in one European country between 1997 and 2011.
大作文：In today’s world, people spend a lot of money on appearance because they want to look younger. Why does this happen? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
提示：
1. 这个题目继续考核报告类的话题，最近已经是连续考核了。
2. 这个题目整体比较新，有点类似于G类的题目，原因可以有内在和外在的原因。
中文提纲：
1. 开头
2. 原因有2个：1. 第一个原因可能是来自于社会压力。这是因为在社交媒体的影响下，追求美丽的标准不断提高，许多人受到同龄人和明星的影响，感到有必要保持年轻的外貌。+例子。+ 2 第二个原因是美容行业的迅速发展。广告和营销策略使得人们容易受到诱惑，投入大量金钱用于外貌的改善。+例子
3. 这整体是一个消极影响。1. 在追求外表的过程中，可能使个人和家庭面临经济压力，影响生活质量。2. 过度关注外貌可能导致人们忽视内在价值。形成物质主义思维。若无法达到理想的外貌标准，可能导致焦虑、抑郁等心理问题。
4. 总结
8分参考范文：
In contemporary society, the obsession with youthfulness has led individuals to invest substantial sums in enhancing their appearance. This trend can primarily be attributed to societal pressures and the pervasive influence of digital media. Social platforms, where meticulously curated images set unrealistic beauty standards, create an environment where individuals feel compelled to conform. Consequently, many believe that a youthful appearance is synonymous with success and social acceptance.在当代社会，对年轻的痴迷使得人们在提升外貌上投入了大量资金。这一趋势主要可以归因于社会压力和数字媒体的普遍影响。社交平台上精心策划的形象设定了不切实际的美丽标准，营造了一种让个人感到必须迎合的环境。因此，许多人相信，年轻的外貌等同于成功和社会认可。
Moreover, the relentless pursuit of an idealized look is often driven by psychological factors.The desire for self-esteemand validation can push individuals to seek external affirmation throughcosmetic procedures and skincare products. This is particularly evident among younger generations, who equate physical attractiveness with personal worth. The beauty industry capitalizes on this mindset, employing aggressive marketing strategies that perpetuate the notion that youthfulness is paramount.此外，对理想化外貌的不断追求往往受到心理因素的驱动。自尊心和认可的渴望促使个人通过美容程序和护肤产品寻求外部肯定。这在年轻一代中尤为明显，他们将身体吸引力与个人价值等同起来。美容行业充分利用了这一思维方式，采用激进的营销策略来延续“年轻至上”的观念。
While there are positive aspects to this phenomenon, such as increased awareness of health and wellness, I contend that the overall implications are negative. An excessive focus on appearance can foster a superficial culture, where intrinsic qualities, such as kindness and intelligence, are overshadowed by physical attributes. Furthermore, this fixation can lead to significant financial strain, with individuals prioritising their looks over essential needs.尽管这种现象有一些积极方面，例如提高了人们对健康和健康生活方式的关注，但我认为整体影响是消极的。过于关注外貌可能会滋生一种肤浅的文化，使得内在品质如善良和智慧被身体特征所掩盖。此外，这种痴迷可能会导致重大的经济负担，使得人们将外貌置于基本需求之上。
Ultimately, while the desire to look youthful may stem from genuine motivations, it is essential to strike a balance between appearance and self-acceptance. Emphasising inner qualities and self-worth can mitigate the adverse effects of this trend, fostering a more holistic understanding of beauty that transcends mere aesthetics.总之，尽管渴望年轻的外貌可能源于真实的动机，但在外貌与自我接受之间找到平衡是至关重要的。强调内在品质和自我价值可以减轻这一趋势的负面影响，促进对美的更全面理解，超越单纯的外观。
11月2日大陆区雅思大小作文预测如下：
大作文:社会-媒体-教育
小作文：柱图-饼图-表格
以下的文章大家至少要考前写个提纲！
1.Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or allow them to do whatever they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be the consequences for these children when they grow up?（教育）
2.More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?（社会）
3.Some people believe that in order to reduce crimes, prisoners should be given longer prison sentences while some people think there are other alternative ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.（犯罪）
4.In recent years, “responsible tourists” have paid attention to preserving both culture and environment of the places they visit. However, some people say that it is impossible to be a “responsible tourist”. To what extent do you agree or disagree? （旅游）
6.News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative?（媒体）
7.Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take actions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.（环境）
8.Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?（教育）
9.In the past, teachers were the main source of information, but today students have a wide source of information, so teachers are no longer important in the modern education. Do you agree or disagree?（教育）
10.Some people think sports games are important for society, while others believe they should be taken as leisure activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 社会
11.Some people think the increasing use of technology in the workplace is good for young people's prospects of gaining a job and harder for old people. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 科技
12.Some people think that with the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, people lose the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 科技
13.Some people think governments should spend money on measures to save languages with few speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 社会语言
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