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907大陆A类考情
小作文：The graph below shows the percentage of workers from five different European countries that were absent for a day or more due to illness from 1991 to 2001. （难度大不）
8+参考范文：（下方有范文录音）
The line graph illustrates the percentage of workers in five different European countries who had a day or more of illness absence from 1991 to 2001.
Overall, the Netherlands consistently had the highest percentage of workers with illness absences, while Germany had the lowest. Over the period, the rates of illness absences generally increased in the Netherlands, France, and Germany, whereas Sweden and the UK experienced fluctuations or slight decreases.
In detail, the Netherlands started at around 5% in 1991, saw a peak at 6% in 1993, and then declined to 4% by 1996. Afterward, there was a steady rise, reaching approximately 6.5% by 2001. Sweden showed a decreasing trend, starting at 5% in 1991 and dropping to around 3% by the mid-1990s. This percentage remained relatively stable with minor fluctuations until 2001.
France had a gradual increase in the percentage of workers with illness absences, starting from about 3% in 1991 and reaching almost 4% by 2001. The UK showed a slightly increasing trend, starting from just below 3% and finishing the period close to 3.5%. Germany had the lowest percentages throughout the decade, with figures consistently below 2%, except for a slight rise to 2% in the final years.
大作文：In order to learn the way other people in the world lives, it is better to look at film and video records than written documents. To what extent do you agree or disagree？
提示：
1. 这个题属于景点的比较类的题目，同学们在论证的时候务必要用到对比论证，相较于written documents，比如书籍+报纸+杂志等。
2.而且这个题目也给了一个目的，也就是说看电影和视频的目的是学习世界其他地区的人们是怎么生活的，不是让你去放松啥的，写这些就又跑题了！
中文提纲：
1. 开头
2. 首先电影能够让人们更好的了解他国人的生活。这是因为电影里面会有高清的画面+特写的镜头+专业的音乐等，全方面得展现一个地区人们的衣物起居。比如英国的喜剧片《憨豆先生》里面能够给人们呈现出一个时间段英国人的生活方式。相比较而言，这些内容通过文字的描述都不够直观。
3.此外，视频也能够给观众带来外国最新最快的信息。这是因为视频很多时候更新很快，特别是在一些短视频平台，如tiktok等，那上面有很多的视频就会反应不同国家不同民族的生活方式，而且观众都能参与评论，更新最新信息。比如，一则30秒的短于美国枪击事件的短视频就可以让全世界的观众直观了解到一些美国最新的动态。而文字内容反馈慢，且内容有限。
4.当然文字也有它的优势，其内容会更为精准和权威。毕竟有时候这些在报纸和书籍上的文字还是需要编辑的审核和校对，出错概率小。但是现在人们生活的节奏很快，大家希望更快更高效更直观得看到各类信息。
5.总而言之，的确电影和媒体相较于文字能够给人们更好得带来他国的资讯。
7.5+参考范文：
On the one hand, videos offer diverse avenues for exploring global lifestyles. Whether it be a film, a documentary, or a concise video on platforms, such as YouTube, videos provide a dynamic and entertaining means of learning. Furthermore, the ubiquitous availability of online content ensures that individuals have access to a plethora of information on various subjects, including the traditions and lifestyles of different cultures worldwide. As a result, watching a video is not only more convenient than reading, but it also captures the attention of viewers visually and aurally, making the learning process more engaging.
However, I believe that written documents such as books, magazines, and newspapers remain invaluable sources of learning. Research indicates that engaging in reading is a more effective method for retaining specific details compared to watching videos. Additionally, books often offer more reliable information owing to the rigorous process of publication. The time and effort invested in the production, publication, and printing of a book usually result in well-researched and dependable content, unlike a substantial portion of the content available on the internet. Hence, as an educational tool, reading may indeed offer superior benefits.
In conclusion, while video technology is undeniably valuable for learning about global cultures, it seems to me that both mediums offer unique advantages, and a balanced approach utilizing both would likely result in the most effective learning outcomes.
9月14日大陆区雅思大小作文预测如下：
大作文:社会-媒体-教育
小作文：饼图-流程地图-表格
以下的文章大家至少要考前写个提纲！
1.Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or allow them to do whatever they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be the consequences for these children when they grow up?（教育）
2.More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?（社会）
3.Some people believe that in order to reduce crimes, prisoners should be given longer prison sentences while some people think there are other alternative ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.（犯罪）
4.In recent years, “responsible tourists” have paid attention to preserving both culture and environment of the places they visit. However, some people say that it is impossible to be a “responsible tourist”. To what extent do you agree or disagree? （旅游）
5.Some people think that the best way to improve road transport safety is to let the driver test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?（社会）
6.News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative?（媒体）
7.Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take actions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.（环境）
8.Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?（教育）
9.In the past, teachers were the main source of information, but today students have a wide source of information, so teachers are no longer important in the modern education. Do you agree or disagree?（教育）
10.Some people think sports games are important for society, while others believe they should be taken as leisure activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 社会
11.Some people think the increasing use of technology in the workplace is good for young people's prospects of gaining a job and harder for old people. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 科技
12.Some people think that with the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, people lose the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 科技
13.Some people think governments should spend money on measures to save languages with few speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 社会语言
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