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在上次讨论中,大家一致认为以“省时又省力”作为开头的观点是懒人神器。此次,我们将关注问题解决型话题。在这一类话题的作文开头部分,我们可以将其分为两个步骤:

  1. 引入话题

  2. 对话题作出回应

首先,进行话题引入:Currently, there has been a notable increase in the frequency of instances where...(后面引导从句)
Notable:指引人注目的,这里强调某种现象发生频率的显著上升。

接下来,回应话题(通常需要回应两个方面:第一个是原因;第二个是解决方案。
While the underlying causes of this issue are diverse, it is crucial that we...(表达原因)
...implement proactive measures to confront it directly.(表达解决方案)

Diverse:多种多样的,形容事物的多样性或复杂性。
Crucial:关键的,强调某事物的重要性和必要性。
Implement:执行,意味着采取措施或计划付诸实践。
Confront it directly:直接面对,表明一种积极应对的态度。

总体来说,开头段可表述为:
Currently, there has been a notable increase in the frequency of instances where many people around the world still go hungry. While the underlying causes of this issue are diverse, it is crucial that we implement proactive measures to confront it directly.


话题:

尽管农业取得了显著进展,全球仍有许多人面临饥饿。
这是为什么呢?
对此问题可以采取什么措施?

首段:

Currently, there has been a notable increase in the frequency of instances where many people around the world still go hungry. While the underlying causes of this issue are diverse, it is crucial that we implement proactive measures to confront it directly.


更多例句:

1. 引入背景和重要性

  • In recent years, there has been growing concern regarding...

  • This report aims to examine the increasing prevalence of...

  • The significance of this issue has become increasingly apparent as...

  • Given the rapid developments in..., it is essential to assess...

2. 陈述问题

  • Despite advancements in..., the issue of... remains a pressing concern.

  • This report highlights the challenges associated with...

  • Many individuals continue to face difficulties related to...

  • The ongoing problem of... necessitates a thorough investigation into...

3. 报告目的

  • The purpose of this report is to explore the factors contributing to...

  • This report will evaluate the potential solutions for...

  • This analysis seeks to understand the underlying causes of...

  • The objective of this report is to provide insights into...


4. 概述结构

  • To address these concerns, this report will first outline... and then propose...

  • This document is structured as follows: initially, it will discuss..., followed by an examination of...

  • The report is divided into several sections, including an overview of..., an analysis of..., and a conclusion with recommendations.


示例句子

  1. In recent years, there has been growing concern regarding the sustainability of agricultural practices worldwide. This report aims to examine the increasing prevalence of food insecurity and its underlying factors.

  2. Despite advancements in technology, the issue of digital divide remains a pressing concern for many communities. This report highlights the challenges associated with access to information and communication technologies.

  3. The purpose of this report is to explore the factors contributing to urban air pollution and to evaluate potential solutions that could mitigate its impact on public health.


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