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教高一,教学内容不难,练习试题简单。但是高一的娃难带,就像教一个蹒跚学步,咿呀学语的小朋友一样,每一步,每处细节都需要点拨到位,不厌其烦,反复操练,否则,他们出现的错误一定会令你匪夷所思。
比如,这次期中考试应用文,要求明确,写一篇稿件,介绍我最喜欢的俱乐部。主题内容和译林版课本必修一Unit1P8-9的Integrated Skills 的内容完全一致。
看似简单吧,其实也不难。可是阅卷时,我们发现孩子们错误百出,远远超出心理预期。
错误如下:文体text type出错,写成书信,写成演讲稿;时态tense误用成一般过去时;body部分不是介绍俱乐部的情况,通篇写自己参加俱乐部的从害羞到自信的心理变化;写成一段式,... …
点拨和积累
文体:(普通)稿件
非书信类
非演讲稿(无需自我介绍或问候语)
2. 三段式:
首行缩进4个英文字母,符合中国人的阅读习惯
3. 俱乐部名词首字母要大写(围绕五育):
the Photography Club, the Calligraphy Club, the Sports Club, the Short Story Writing Club, the English Reading Club, the Poem Appreciation Club, the Movie Club, the Chess Club, ... ...
4. 结构谋篇
Paragraph 1:
开门见山,引出自己最喜欢的俱乐部名字,如
Among all the clubs, my favorite one is the Chinese Painting Club.
The club that I like most is the Basketball Club.
Paragraph 2:
笼统介绍俱乐部的基本情况。如创建时间,创建目的,成员聚集时间和地点,成员人数和活动内容等。以the Chinese Painting Club为例。
The Chinese Painting Club, which was set up in 2018, now has 48 members, aimed at improving Chinese painting skills.
All the club members gather/meet every Friday afternoon from 4:30 to 5:30 in the school art hall.
A series of activities are organized / carried out, ranging from … to …
具体内容
1. 听讲座,学习基本绘画知识原理和技巧
attend lectures about basic principles and skills of Chinese painting
2. 一个月到室外写生一次,成员互相探讨绘画思想和技巧
draw a sketch outdoors once per month and share our unique painting ideas and techniques
3. 鉴赏大师们的中国画
appreciate masterpieces of some local outstanding artists
4. 定期举办学员绘画展
The original production of club members will be displayed regularly.
注意:不必介绍某一次活动过程,或个人加入俱乐部的心路历程。
6.第三节:个人收获(参加的好处)---表达时主语要多替换
benefit / gain a lot from it
enrich our cultural life
provide relaxation after heavy schoolwork
clear our head of stress and tension
inspire our passion for art
feel the charm of Chinese painting while having fun
find like-minded friends to explore the wonderful world of Chinese traditional art
offer a good platform for me to develop in an all-rounded way and show my talents
enable me to realize my artistic potential and gain a deep insight into the traditional art form
7. 时态:现在时(一般现在时或现在完成时)