前言
那年的Pinky带给我们太多快乐和开心,今年又到了写萌宠的时候,不禁又勾起了我们粉红色,哦不,粉红鸭的回忆。一同事很感兴趣原文,今天贴出来让大家欣赏一下。
原文概要
母亲从宠物店买回一只染成粉红色的小鸭,取名粉红鸭pinky。小鸭一天天长大,成了家里的一员。一天,爸爸说,该让鸭子回归正常鸭生了。虽不舍,他们决定送到离家两英里远的公园。接连送走两次,pinky都独自返回家里。第三次,爸爸再次把pinky装进箱子,…~~~
小粉红pinky 的多彩鸭生,在高二孩子们信马由缰的笔下徐徐展开……
1. 人与自然和谐篇:女儿哀求爸爸不要送走小粉红pinky,爸爸也不舍,决定留下,从此人和鸭幸福像一家人共度余生,直至自然终老!
2. 吃货篇:爸爸再次送小粉红鸭去公园,路遇公园烧烤摊,残忍杀死,制成北京烤鸭,带给女儿品尝,女儿直呼,yummy!
3. 悲惨结局篇:爸爸坚持把pinky送走,pinky挣扎从窗口飞出,不幸被车撞死,女儿痛不欲生,将其埋于后院,种上一棵树,每年纪念。
4. 脑洞大开篇:爸爸第三次把pinky送回,一段时间杳无信息,直至一个月pinky回来了,生下五个宝宝,原来是为了保护腹中宝宝回到娘家寻求庇护,可怜天下慈鸭心!
5. 悬疑侦破篇:爸爸和女儿很惊奇,pinky从公园怎么做到独自回到家的呢?他们驾车返回,偷偷观察,原来pinky和鱼塘小伙伴嬉戏一会儿,自己从沿街一路风霜一路躲避车辆历经艰辛返回。父女大为感动,留下picky,一起和谐生活。
6. 动物成精篇:picky被送走时,嘴里含着米粒,一路撒下留下记号,最后顺利返回。
7. C位出道篇:送pinky去公园,pinky不从,嘎嘎gaga乱叫,女儿把它救下,从此取名,lady Gaga…
原文材料
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Sara Savick remembers one special Easter when she was nine years old. Her parents gave her a baby duckling in a yellow basket.
“Mom said later that she bought the little duck because she felt sorry for it,” recalled Sara. The people at the pet store colored the feathers pink for Easter. Sara named the duck Pinky.
Sara's mother really didn't think the baby duck would survive very long. But to her surprise, Pinky grew and got stronger and stronger. Soon, the little duckling was a healthy, hungry duck with white feathers.
“We fed Pinky oatmeal, cooked and uncooked, and small pieces of vegetables,” said Sara. Pinky lived inside the house with Sara and her family. She specially fancied taking baths with Sara. Everyone treated Pinky as a family member.
But just when everything appeared to be perfect, the night of the “talk” came. Sara’s Mom and Dad sat her down, explaining that the best thing for Pinky was to live a normal duck life, with other ducks. It was not natural for ducks to live indoors with a family, her father told her. He added Pinky needed to swim in ponds and do all the same things that ducks in the wild do.
Sara started to cry, knowing what was going to happen. Sara's parents decided to take Pinky to a park, which was two miles away. There was a pond with a lot of other ducks. Pinky would have the chance to live a natural life and Sara could still visit her.
The big day came. Sara and her parents put Pinky in a box and drove to the park. Sara said that Pinky did not look happy; maybe Pinky was convinced that she was a human, not a duck.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右:
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1 Everyone was sad when they left Pinky at the pond, even Sara's father.
Paragraph 2 The next morning, when looking out of the kitchen window Sara couldn't believe her eyes!
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Everyone was sad when they left Pinky at the pond, even Sara's father. But he tried to convince Sara that Pinky was fine. Walking towards the car, Sara looked over her shoulder and saw Pinky standing alone. The other ducks were swimming around in circles looking at Pinky. To Sara, it seemed that they were trying to identify the strange animal. They didn’t recognize Pinky as a duck. Worried about Pinky, Sara pictured Pinky being bullied by other ducks the whole night.
Paragraph2:
The next morning when looking out of the kitchen window, Sara couldn't believe her eyes! There was Pinky, happily walking around on the grass. Thrilled at what she saw, she kept asking herself,"How did she make it?" After all, it was two miles away and he managed to walk back through the city street. Incredible! But her parents drove Pink back to the pond again regardless of her request. The following morning, there was Pinky again on the grass! Seeing Pinky again, her father shook his head in disbelief, and moved his lips without saying anything. Meanwhile,Sarah was so overjoyed that she held pinky in her arms, tears streaming down her cheeks.
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Paragraph1:
Everyone was sad when they left Pinky at the pond, even Sara’s father. But he tried to convince Sara that Pinky would be fine. Walking towards the car, Sara kept looking over her shoulder and saw Pinky standing alone.The other ducks were swimming around in circles. It seemed that they were trying to identify the unexpected visitor. Pinky quacked restlessly and flapped its wings as if begging them not to leave her behind. On the way home, Sara pressed her forehead against the window without uttering a single word. Countless scenes where Pinky brought happiness to her flashed through Sara’s mind that night. Turning over in bed from time to time, she found it hard to fall asleep.
当他们把Pinky留在池塘时,每个人都很伤心,包括Sara的父亲。但他试图让莎拉相信Pinky会没事的。莎拉朝车走去,不停地回头看,只见Pinky独自站在那里。其他的鸭子在转圈游泳。他们似乎在试图辨认那位不速之客。Pinky不安地嘎嘎叫着,拍打着翅膀,好像在乞求他们不要把她留下。回家的路上,萨拉把额头贴在窗户上,一句话也没说。那天晚上,无数次Pinky给她带来幸福的场景在Sara的脑海中闪过。她在床上不时翻来覆去,很难入睡。
The next morning, when looking out of the kitchen window, Sara couldn’t believe her eyes! In sight was her beloved Pinky, walking around in the yard. How could she make it? After all, it was two miles away from the park. Screaming out in excitement, Sara dashed out to Pinky and affectionately stroked her feathers, which was now stained with mud. Sara’s father shook his head in disbelief. “Daddy, please don't....” Sara looked up at her father pleadingly, who eventually promised never to take Pinky to the park. From that day on, Pinky lived an unusual duck life with them ever after.
第二天早上,萨拉从厨房的窗户往外看,简直不敢相信自己的眼睛!眼前是她心爱的Pinky,在院子里走来走去。她是怎么做到的呢?毕竟,它离公园有两英里远。莎拉兴奋地尖叫着,冲到Pinky身边,深情地抚摸着她的羽毛,现在它已经沾上了泥巴。萨拉的父亲难以置信地摇了摇头。“爸爸,请不要……” 萨拉抬起头恳求地看着父亲,父亲终于答应永远不送走Pinky。从那天起,Pinky和他们一起过着不寻常的鸭生。