写作,是一种可以锻炼出来的能力

文摘   2024-11-30 21:50   日本  



写作1

We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans. At first, I was overwhelmed by concerns about how I would perform during our collaboration. Noticing my uneasiness, he offered to communicate openly with me and praise my commitment to our project. After his encouragement, my confidence returned, inspiring me to fulfill my potential and achieve our goals. To complete the task on time, he worked against the clock and sometimes stayed in the lab until midnight. With our joint efforts, our project went smoothly as we had planned.

Then, one day, I got word that he was in the hospital for a serious illness. Hearing the news, I rushed to the hospital and found him pale and weak, lying in bed. “You just have to take care of yourself. Leave the project on my shoulders. I won’t let you down,” I promised him, reassuring him. Under his guidance through his smartphone, I worked on the project with all my heart and made an excellent presentation that received thunderous applause from my classmates and the teacher. Our pain and sweat were eventually rewarded. Not only did I win first place, but I also gained a close friend who brightened my life and encouraged me to be the best version of myself.



写作2

Dear Sir/Madam,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to express my interest in the position of radio host, as I recently learned that our school radio station is recruiting new members.

My qualifications and enthusiasm make me a strong candidate for this role. Firstly, my proficiency in English enables me to effectively share Chinese culture and captivating campus stories with students and teachers alike. Furthermore, I possess a warm and pleasant voice, which I believe can enhance the appeal of our broadcasts and attract a wide audience on campus. These skills will undoubtedly contribute to the popularity and success of our programs.

Joining the school radio station has been a longstanding aspiration of mine. Above all, I am passionate about making a positive impact on my peers, bringing them joy, and sharing the latest updates with them. Additionally, I take great satisfaction in uplifting others during difficult times. It would be my honor if my voice could serve as a source of comfort and encouragement for listeners.

Thank you very much for considering my application. I am eager to contribute my skills and passion to the radio station, and I look forward to the opportunity to make a meaningful difference.

Yours sincerely,
Li Hua


其实我有一段时间没有用英文写作了,但因为要教学生写作,而且最近几次都是课堂当堂完成。给学生树立榜样,毕竟靠英语吃饭的人,英语基本功不能太差。 


我从来没有背过范文。甚至也很少去研究人家的写作句型。但我在阅读的时候,会留意句子和句子之间的衔接,会留意哪些表达(词 短语 句子)表达恰到好处。我喜欢研究句子的节奏,这是非常值得我学习的地方。作者是怎样做到句子写到那么长,还把事情讲的那么清楚的。

Of the more than 17,400 Australians aged 15–19 who responded to the Youth Survey Report, 56 per cent said cost of living was one of their biggest concerns, eclipsing other big worries like climate change and mental health.


另外在看文学作品或者小说的时候,那种一下子触动内心的句子,无法用语言表达那种激动,如同偶然听到一首美丽的音乐。如果你看过夏洛特的网英文版,你看过小王子的英文版,你知道我说的是什么。

虽然很多英语老师提倡让孩子进行大量的非虚构阅读,因为高考的阅读理解,雅思阅读,很多是非虚构阅读。但虚构阅读才能潜移默化培养一个人的阅读审美。不管是中文,还是英文,我相信,只有看过大量的文学作品的人,接受了美好的思想和文字熏陶的人,心中会有自己独特的审美,这是试卷上的分数无法显示的。


而我提倡的写作能力,是写作自动化能力。就是不需要任何思考,你任凭你的想法自动组织成文,你相信你的直觉,你相信你的内心的声音,你无需刻意组织语言,你要让语言流淌成河。


所以,在我的课堂,一部分写作是为了应试的,为了中考作文和高考作文,一部分是为了解放孩子们的心灵的。解放思想,才能听见内心的声音,才能让文字如野马驰骋。

应试写作为了分数,而自由写作是为了灵魂。

如果一个孩子一开始接触写作,就是为了获得高分而写,那估计很难写出让人心动的文字。他也可能不知道写作,真正的写作,是为了传递自己的心声的。

我越来越觉得,我们很多时候要想办法脱离目前的游戏规则,才能真正玩好。如果只在别人制定的规则下玩,卷是很难避免的。但如果你不必为了别人设计的优秀,成功,幸福,受欢迎,美丽的目标去奋斗,而是为了发现你自己,释放你自己的潜能,你会发现,你没有对手,你无需和任何人竞争。

学英语,我们听了太多的方法,但我们很少听从内心。不能眼睁睁顺大流,包含所谓的鸡娃宝典,很多时候都是一种毒害。

孩子首先是一个人,其次才是学生。

先做好一个健康的人,然后做一个正常的学生。

先做好一个健康的大人,然后做一个合格的父母。


我知道,即使我写再多文章,也无法改变国内大部分孩子的英语学习现状,和他们未来不得不为了名校挤破头的现状,但或许有少部分人愿意尝试其他的方法。


我是爱迪生,学生时代是一个听话的乖宝宝,工作时也是一个任劳任怨的职场人,但自从我辞职以后,我就再也不愿意上一天班。因为我不愿被那些公认的优秀的标准束缚,包括所谓的先进的教学方法。

人要结合现实不断调整,不存在最好的适合所有孩子的方法,甚至一个人自己的学习也是不断在调整的。

2024年,11月的最后一天,我在本文里,送给你一句话:

我希望,不管你花多长时间,去体验更多的心安,去接受平凡的自己,去发现平凡生活中所有美好,去感谢每一个随手帮你的人,去释放你内在的正能量。你无需用所有成功者的标准来衡量你自己,无需用前人的标准来衡量你自己,你需要找到你自己的节奏,你自己的舞台,你自己的世界。


这段听起来,鸡汤味道很浓,但这也是我最近3年一直在探索的。

我并非没有烦恼,我也每天都在修心,也会偶尔焦虑,我接受我的任何的感受和情绪变化。人生,体验感很重要,而最多时候,人是和自己相处,所以处理好和自己的关系常常被忽视。这比处理人际关系更加重要。


每天留一点时间给自己,远离社交媒体,远离所有试图给你讲道理的人。

需要一点空白,需要一点独处时刻,我们需要发呆,需要聆听自己内心的声音。需要调养自己内心的各种情绪。

所有的平台都在想办法瓜分我们的生命,只有我们浑然不觉。

愿你有更多的安宁,而不是轰轰烈烈的快乐。


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