写作文时如果篇篇都是千篇一律的句型,是很难打动阅卷老师的。所以,我们要多使用不同结构、不同类型和不同长度的句子,才能避免写作变得呆板、单调和沉闷。
正确把握句式变化,使句式多样化,可以使文章生动、有趣。如何使句子多样化呢?请看下面的例子。
例句:
I got up late this morning. I had to catch the early bus. I was late for class.
这几个简单句可以用下列的不同方式来表达:
(1) As I got up late this morning and I had to catch the early bus, I was late for class.
(2) I was late for class because I got up late this morning and I had to catch the early bus.
(3) Getting up late this morning and having to catch the early bus, I was late for class.
(4) I got up late this morning and I had to catch the early bus, so I was late for class.
(5) I was late for class. It was because I got up late and had to catch the early bus.
(6) The reason why I was late for class this morning was that I got up late and I had to catch the early bus.
(7) I got up late this morning and had to catch the early bus. That was why I was late for class.
(8) If I had not got up late this morning and hadn't had to catch the early bus, I would not have been late for class.
下面这个句子如何用多种方式来表达呢?
The young pilot was on his first overseas training. He felt very uneasy.
(1) The boy on his first overseas training felt very uneasy. (介词短语作定语)
(2) The boy felt very uneasy during his first overseas training. (介词短语作状语)
(3) The boy's first overseas training made him feel very uneasy. (名词短语作主语)
(4) Extreme uneasiness seized the boy on his first overseas training. (非人称作主语)
(5) The boy was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy. (简单句+现在分词短语)
(6) It being his first overseas training, the boy felt very uneasy. (逻辑主语+现在分词短语+简单句)
(7) Being on his first overseas training, the boy felt very uneasy. (现在分词短语+简单句)
(8) The boy was on his first overseas training and felt very uneasy. (介词短语作表语)
(9) The boy, who was on his first overseas training, felt very uneasy. (插人非限定性定语从句)
(10) When the boy was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy. (时间状语从句+主句)
(11) As the boy was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy. (原因状语从句+主句)
(12) The boy was on his first overseas training, so that he felt very uneasy. (主语+结果状语从句)
想要让简单句结构多样化,还可以使用不同风格的开头。
Air, water and oxygen, everything is necessary to life.
Dark and empty, the house looked very different from the way I remembered it.
Too often, I didn’t see Papa until the evening.
To me the news was very interesting, but to my sister very boring.
Hearing the news, they immediately set off for Shanghai.Troubled by a dream, he woke up with a start.
To pass the exam, you should work very hard.
My advice you would not listen to, and my helps you laughed at. Now you will have what you asked for.
It is generally accepted that people are motivated by success.
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