611 雅思写作 11-12月机考预测 大作文:not homebound 纸考通用

文摘   2024-11-11 07:02   重庆  



考点:分析类;社会生活

本文要点:预测题、考点解析、参考范文


01

题目本尊




如今,许多人呆在家里的时间越来越少。
原因是什么?这种趋势对个人和社会的影响是什么?


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02

考点解析



这个题,首先要注意第二问问的是effects,不要惯性思维写solutions。

本题也是两个body段。reasons + effects。

主要是积累观点。

但本题的观点也不算太容易,因为涉及到多种重叠因素(生活方式、工作类型和文化影响、科技趋势等)。

好像啥都可以写、又咋写都不扣题的一种感觉。


可以参照独居、工作压力等题目的思路:


446 雅思写作 5月大作文预测 纸机考通用:啃老 vs 独居

457 雅思写作 5-6月机考预测 内卷 加班导致没有个人生活

579 雅思写作 10月机考预测 大作文:commuter students 纸考通用

500 雅思写作 7月机考预测 大作文:work life balance 谁不想啊

602 雅思写作 11月机考预测 大作文:no longer户外



03

参照示范



Part 1:reasons


原因考虑这几方面:


  • Changing work culture工作模式等的改变: Many jobs now require longer hours, commuting, or flexibility that can keep people away from home. 

  • Increased social and recreational options社交娱乐的改变: People may choose to spend time in cafes, gyms, or entertainment venues.

  • Technological influence科技: With smartphones and remote work options, people can stay connected outside the home. 


One key reason people spend less time at home is the evolving work culture. Many jobs now demand extended hours, frequent commuting, or flexible schedules, which often keep employees away from home for long periods. Social and recreational opportunities also contribute to this trend. People now often choose to socialize in cafes, gyms, or entertainment venues, which draws them out of their homes. What's more, technology plays a significant role. With smartphones and remote work tools, people can stay connected and productive from almost anywhere. This ability to work and engage socially outside the home has shifted routines, reducing the time people spend in their own residences.


人们在家待的时间越来越少的一个关键原因是不断发展的工作模式。现在许多工作都需要延长工作时间、频繁上下班或灵活,这往往使员工长时间不在家。社交和娱乐机会也助长了这一趋势。人们现在经常选择在咖啡馆、健身房或娱乐场所进行社交活动,这让他们走出家门。更重要的是,技术起着重要的作用。有了智能手机和远程工作工具,人们几乎可以在任何地方保持联系和高效。这种在外工作和参与社交活动的能力改变了人们的日常生活,减少了人们在自己家中度过的时间。



Part 2:effects


This shift has several effects on individuals. For one, spending less time at home means people are less likely to have a stable place for rest and relaxation. It can also reduce the time available for family bonding, potentially weakening family ties and reducing the overall sense of support that home life typically provides. Furthermore, less time at home might mean a decline in home-cooked meals and other healthful home-based habits, impacting individual well-being. 


这种转变对个人有几个影响首先,花更少的时间在家里意味着人们不太可能有一个稳定的地方休息和放松。它会减少家庭纽带的可用时间,潜在地削弱家庭关系,减少家庭生活通常提供的整体支持感。此外,在家的时间减少,也意味着在家做饭少,其他健康的家庭习惯会减少,可能影响个人的健康。




On a societal level, this trend can lead to greater demand for public and commercial spaces, such as cafes, restaurants, and co-working spaces. While this can benefit local economies, it may also result in reduced community cohesion, as people have fewer interactions with neighbors and may feel less connected to their local areas. Over time, this could weaken social bonds within communities, as people prioritize social interactions in broader networks over local relationships.


在社会层面上,这一趋势可能导致对公共和商业空间的更大需求,如咖啡馆、餐馆和联合工作空间。虽然这有利于当地经济,但也可能导致社区凝聚力下降,因为人们与邻居的互动减少,可能会感到与当地的联系减少随着时间的推移,这可能会削弱社区内的联系,因为人们会优先考虑更广泛网络中的社会互动,而不是本地关系




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