600 雅思写作 10-11月机考预测 大作文:overeating 纸考通用

文摘   教育   2024-10-30 07:01   重庆  

题目:

研究表明,暴饮暴食和吸烟一样有害。因此,某些食品的广告应该被禁止,就像香烟在许多国家被禁止一样。你同不同意?
(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m1Ltd-bwkqE)

这个题目要注意审题哈。

注意题目问的,并不是直接ban不健康的食物21 高老师top50-21 大作文最高频50题范文合集 食物:不许卖不健康的饮食 审题&两边倒写法二才是)。

看起来是在说健康与饮食,其实是在考广告:the advertising of certain food products should be banned

属实是借壳上市了
考法和广告类考点的一个非常经典、古老的题目(11 高老师top50-11 大作文最高频50题范文合集 儿童:广告的影响)一模一样,加上overeating的背景,变个花样考。
题目有一定合理性,但完全ban也不现实。
因此可以两边倒:While I acknowledge the potential dangers of unhealthy food marketing, I believe that a balanced approach—rather than an outright ban—is more effective in addressing this issue.
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One of the primary arguments for banning food advertising is the significant health risks associated with overeating. Just as smoking was once normalized through advertising, many food products are marketed in ways that downplay their negative health impacts. For instance, fast food and sugary beverages are often portrayed as convenient or enjoyable, obscuring their contributions to obesity and related diseases. Banning such advertising could reduce consumption and promote healthier lifestyle choices, akin to the reduction in smoking rates following strict regulations on tobacco advertising.

支持的主要理由之一是与暴饮暴食有关的重大健康风险。正如吸烟曾经通过广告变得常态化一样,许多食品的营销方式也淡化了它们对健康的负面影响。例如,快餐和含糖饮料经常被描绘成方便而愉快的,掩盖了它们对肥胖和相关疾病的贡献。禁止此类广告可以减少消费,促进更健康的生活方式选择,类似于严格管制烟草广告后吸烟率的降低。


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However, it is essential to consider the counterarguments. Personal responsibility plays a crucial role in dietary choices, and banning food advertising may not effectively address the root causes of overeating. Individuals must ultimately take responsibility for their health, and removing advertisements could shift the blame onto companies rather than encouraging self-regulation. Moreover, a complete ban could have adverse economic effects, potentially leading to job losses within the food industry and stifling innovationA more balanced approach may involve regulatory measures rather than outright bans. For instance, imposing restrictions on how unhealthy foods are advertised, especially to children, could protect vulnerable populations without eliminating consumer choice. Such strategies can promote awareness without infringing on personal freedoms.

但是也要考虑一下反对意见。个人责任在饮食选择中起着至关重要的作用,禁止食品广告可能无法从根源上解决暴饮暴食。个人最终必须为自己的健康负责,取消广告可能会把责任推给公司,而不是鼓励自我监管。此外,全面禁止可能会产生不利的经济影响,比如可能导致食品行业的失业扼杀创新更公平的方法可能加强监管,而不是直接禁止。例如,限制不健康食品的广告方式,特别是对儿童的广告,可以在不消除消费者选择的情况下保护弱势群体。这种策略可以在不侵犯个人自由的情况下提高意识。 



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