602 雅思写作 11月机考预测 大作文:no longer户外

文摘   2024-11-01 07:03   重庆  










考点:年轻人不再户外

本文要点:预测题、考点解析、范文


01

题目本尊


如今,末和节假日时,年轻人不怎么去自然环境中进行户外活动,例如远足、登山之类的。为什么?怎么鼓励他们走出去?

(https://promova.com/english-vocabulary/outdoor-activities-list)

题目有两问(why + suggestions)


02

真题解析


本题纸考概率偏低哈,但不排除;主体段观点的拓展偏难,建议纸机考都了解下观点。


题目是2021年旧题,当时一出来就解析过:

写作13 真题篇13 2021/04/17 雅思考试 大作文题目+解析 “一起爬山吗?”


本题本质上和下面这个新题差不多:
top10新题 大作文 纸机考通用 10-13:shopping > organized activities 近期高频

两个题都属于新题,以前纸考很少,反映了现代生活方式的改变(尤其top10-13:shopping > organized activities这个新题,机考很高频,概率要更高些hhh)~

这种题目,题意和话题本身并不陌生。题型也简单,主要是难在body段的质量,很能看出论证水平。要6.5+的同学,多注意body。观点并不需要多么标新立异。


本题很好写。

题目要求明确,指定了why + suggestions。分别作答即可。

题目有两问的题型,最简单安全的写法就是两个主体段,一问写一段,问什么答什么,先问什么先答什么

加上开头和结尾,一共四段


03

参考示范


body 1:why

Young people today are increasingly less engaged in outdoor activitiesThe decline in outdoor activities among young people, such as hiking and mountain climbing, primarily due to can be attributed primarily to the influence of technology and urbanization. The rise of smartphones, video games, and social media has created a digital environment where young individuals find instant entertainment and social interaction indoors. This shift in leisure activities often leads to prolonged screen time, diminishing their interest in exploring nature. Additionally, many young people reside in urban areas where with limited access to natural environments is limited. This lack of proximity to parks and hiking trails makes it more challenging for them to participate in outdoor recreation. Furthermore, safety concerns from parents about potential risks associated with outdoor activities can discourage both participation and encouragement, reinforcing a cycle of inactivity that limits young people's experiences in natural settings.


年轻人户外活动(如徒步旅行和登山)减少,主要可归因于科技和城市化的影响。智能手机、视频游戏和社交媒体的兴起形成一种数字环境,年轻人可以在室内找到即时娱乐和社交互动。这种休闲活动的转变往往导致他们看屏幕的时间延长,降低了他们探索自然的兴趣。此外,许多年轻人居住在城市地区,接触自然环境的机会有限。附近没有公园和徒步小径的地方,这种缺乏导致他们参加户外娱乐活动更具挑战性。此外,父母担心户外活动潜在风险,这种安全担忧可能会阻碍孩子的参与和鼓励,从而加剧了不活动的循环,限制了年轻人在自然环境中的经历。



body 2: suggestions 
To counter this trend, several strategies can be implemented to encourage young people to engage in outdoor activities. First, organized programs through schools and community organizations can introduce young individuals to outdoor experiences, such as hiking clubs or nature workshops. These programs not only provide structured opportunities but also foster a sense of community and shared adventure. AdditionallyWhat's more, parents can play a crucial role by prioritizing family outings in nature, such as camping trips or picnics in local parks. These experiences can cultivate a lifelong appreciation for the outdoors. Furthermore, educating young people about the numerous physical and mental health benefits of spending time outdoors—such as improved fitness levels and reduced stress—can motivate them to seek out nature. By promoting accessible outdoor spaces and leveraging social media to share outdoor experiences, we can inspire young people to explore the natural world and enhance their well-being through outdoor recreation.

为了应对这一趋势,可以实施一些策略来鼓励年轻人参与户外活动。首先,学校和社区可以组织项目向年轻人介绍户外体验,比如远足俱乐部或自然工作坊。这些项目不仅提供了结构化的机会,而且还培养了社区归属感和共同冒险精神。此外,父母可以发挥至关重要的作用,优先考虑家庭户外活动,如露营旅行或在当地公园野餐。这些经历可以培养对户外活动的终身热爱。此外,教育年轻人户外活动身心健康的诸多好处——比如提高健康水平和减轻压力——可以激励他们去寻找大自然,并通过户外娱乐提高他们的幸福感。


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