572 雅思写作 9-10月机考预测 大作文：food technology+USDA英文原版素材 纸考通用
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教育
2024-09-27 07:00
北京
众所周知，科技进步使食物种类和质量发生了巨大变化。有人认为这是一种进步，而另一些人则认为这种变化有害。讨论两种观点并给出你自己的观点。(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m9rrE3QGFPc)----------------------------------来学习一下美国农业部USDA官网如何描述科技对于农业的重要性的（红框素材建议背诵）：![]()
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(均选自美国农业部官网)
这些素材，语言地道、用词精确却很自然（甚至词汇简单）、正式，积累下来变成自己的东西，对考试非常有用。背下来，加一下段首中心句，基本上就可以组成整个view 1的全段内容了。----------------------------------人类有greater range and quality of food，也有一些坏处。我比较推荐的两个坏处是：food waste和challenge to traditional farmers。（其他观点倒不是不能写，比如转基因的negatives之类，但是难度较大，不提前专门准备很难写出高质量、有深度的论证。因此不推荐。自己有把握也完全可以写的哈。）food waste之前也写过，可以借鉴427 食物浪费一文（戳横线超链接可以跳转阅读）和下面的Forbes报道：(Forbes：How Technology Is Transforming The Food Industry, contributed by Nicole Martin)
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(国际农业研究磋商组织CGIAR官网)
把food waste和jobs两方面的报道结合，加一加additionally的衔接词和段首topic sentence，全段也拿捏了~----------------------------------自己的看法，可以写个利大于弊：好处很重要，但是缺点也要克服（并针对waste和loss of jobs说一下我们可以怎么办）。例如：In my view, the benefits of technological
advancements in food production outweigh the drawbacks. Innovations have greatly improved food
quality, accessibility, and sustainability. However, to counteract issues likefood waste and job losses among traditional farmers, we must implement targeted
solutions. For instance, improving supply chain management can significantly
reduce food waste by ensuring products reach consumers more efficiently. Additionally,
sSupporting small farmers through training and access to resources can also help them
adapt to new technologies while fostering a more equitable and
sustainable food system.
