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Doctor Achebe:
This week, we'll be looking at what governments around the world are doing to improve transportation in large cities. Some governments are expanding roadways - adding lanes to highways, widening other heavily used routes, and even constructing new roads. Other governments are focusing on improvements to public transportation by modernizing existing train and bus systems. Which approach do youthink should be the priority in large cities? why?
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同学二:
Echoing xx's perspective, I firmly believe that modernizing public transportation should be the top priority for city governments. This approach can effectively alleviate traffic congestion faced by almost all major cities
First, one of the main reasons commuters hesitate to use subways or buses is the overcrowding, coupled with waiting times that stretch beyond what most people can tolerate. If the government allocates sufficient funds to expand bus fleets, upgrade subway systems with functioning air conditioning, and extend routes to reach more neighborhoods, people would be much more inclined to take public transportation rather than driving their own cars and facing the risk of getting stuck in traffic. With fewer private vehicles clogging the roads, traffic flow would improve significantly. For instance, in my city, after the local authority established a dedicated bus lane during rush hours to bypass congested areas, over 20 percent of drivers switched to taking buses, resulting in a noticeable reduction in traffic congestion.
Admittedly, expanding roadways may initially seem like a viable solution since it provides more space for vehicles, potentially easing gridlock in the short term. However, in the long run, this approach could actually exacerbate the problem, as broader and faster lanes would likely encourage more people to drive.
In conclusion, it is far more prudent for governments to prioritize the modernization of existing public transportation systems.
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