这里是
Eva托福学习团
考情分析
第533期
今天推送的是
11月13日托福·考题分析.
以下思路和范文仅供同学们学习·参考。
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综合写作回忆
reading讲细菌清理船油泄露的缺点；lecture讲这些缺点都可以忽略
一个说是细菌清理完之后population会dominate海，听力说细菌吃完油没食物就死了。
第二个说细菌会给其他生物提供养料，导致ecosystem失衡。听力说传统方法清油太慢，对ecosystem破坏更大，而且他们自己会再平衡。
第三个说spill prevention没做好会blabla，听力说company有好多理由去做好，因为其他地方赔钱给渔民、补贴旅游业都挺花钱(命中写作团day17原题！)
学术写作分析
Dr. Achebe:
On the day of outdoor classes, students will be transported to local parks. There, teachers will help students explore nature and learn about the environment (for example, plants and animals), environmental problems (such as pollution), and ways of addressing these problems. Do you think that outdoor classes once a month will be a worthwhile use of students' instructional time and school resources?
Kelly:
We should avoid burdening teachers with additional responsibilities during instructional time. Teachers are already tasked with delivering quality education and managing classrooms effectively. Adding more duties, such as administrative tasks or non-teaching responsibilities, can divert their focus from teaching. Instead, we should prioritize supporting teachers in their primary role.
Andrew:
Hands-on learning outside the classroom can help students understand environmental problems in a tangible way and spark their interest to learn more. For example, measuring air or water quality in local areas impacted by pollution can vividly demonstrate environmental threats. Outdoor learning experiences make environmental issues real to students, motivating them to care about finding solutions.
1. 这道题重复了23年10月10日的考试原题。也命中了我们写作团里day3练习的原题。这也是我们写作团今年第11次命中原题了！
团里重点讲解了写作要点，也推送了范文。写作团里的同学应该很幸运了！
2. 好处：
① 激发学生的学习兴趣/学生会学得更好。不同于在教室里听老师的授课，学生可以真实都看到外在世界，发现一些环境问题：比如雾霾city smog/动物栖息地减少habitat loss。运用课堂上的知识解决一些问题(students can witness real-world applications of what they learn)。觉得课堂很有用，就会认真学习。
② 有利于学生开阔视野，学到更多的内容。（Exposure to nature and environmental issues can deepen their understanding and interest：native flora and fauna）
坏处：
①学习效率不高，老师管理起来很麻烦。比如小朋友被环境分心，不好好听老师的讲解。
②浪费学校的资源。学校一般都花了很多钱有自己的实验室，已经足够让学生去学习。（The cost-effectiveness of using in-house labs vs. field trips）
③给学校和老师带来额外的负担。学校要支付额外的费用，比如学生的车费，餐费，甚至还要安排更多的老师来管理学生。(Financial strain on school budgets.)
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